Question

10．時下，越來越多的家庭擁有了轎車，同時車禍也在不斷上升．請圍繞"How to Drive safely？"寫一篇80～100詞的文章，內(nèi)容要點如下（括號中的詞匯可供參考）：
為了保護(hù)你和他人，開車時應(yīng)記住以下幾點：（in order to，protect ）
1．不酒后駕車；（drink wine）
2．不疲勞駕駛；（tiredly）
3．開車途中不使用電話：
4．遇到行人減慢你的車速．（slow down）
How to Drive Safely？
Nowadays，more and more families have cars．At the same time，there are a lot of car accidents every day．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So in order to protect you and others，you should obey the following when you're driving．為了保護(hù)你和別人的安全，開車的時候你應(yīng)該遵守以下規(guī)則．
高分句型二：
Finally，you should slow down when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road．
最后，當(dāng)你看到有人開車走在你前面的路上時，你應(yīng)該放慢速度．
句型一 in order to protect you and others..該部分使用了固定短語in order to 位于句首，作目的狀語
句型二 when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road 該句是一個由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句
除此以外，該文章還有以下短語和重要詞匯：in front of 在．．前面

解答 Nowadays，more and more families have cars．At the same time，there are a lot of car accidents every day．So in order to protect you and others，you should obey the following when you're driving．（高分句型一）（點明寫作目的）First，you mustn't drive your car after drinking wine．If you really need to drink some，you can take a taxi or a bus to the restaurant or home．Then you'd better not drive tiredly．When you feel tired，you can stop your car to have a rest．Next，don't use your phone when you're driving．Finally，you should slow down when you see someone walking in front of your car on the road．（高分句型二）
   If all the drivers can remember these，there will be fewer car accidents．（總結(jié)開車重要性）

點評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．