Question

讀寫任務(wù) (共1小題，滿分25分)閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Drunk driving, a major concern currently, is not a funny thing, which has killed many people and ruined the lives of many others. At present, traffic accidents become "the world's first harm".

Two months ago, after drinking a lot of alcohol, my friend's uncle drove the car home. He was heavily drunk, but he still drove home by himself. On the road near his home, an old lady was going across the road, but his uncle didn't notice her and he was still moving on under the influence of alcohol. And the old lady didn't see his uncle, either. In the end, the lady died. Later, a blood test showed the alcohol in every 100 cc of his uncle's blood had reached 175.7 mg, indicating he was seriously drunk.

Had it not been for his uncle's drunkenness, the terrible accident would not have happened. If the lady hadn't died, she would live a happy life with her daughters and sons. And his uncle's home was also destroyed by his uncle. Therefore, two families were destroyed.

I wish more people could realize the seriousness of drunk driving and obey the traffic regulations faithfully. Always remember: refuse to drink and drive, and give a safe world to you and me!

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 用約120個(gè)詞結(jié)合“醉駕”就交通安全進(jìn)行討論，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）造成交通事故的主要原因；

（2）通過具體事例說明交通事故的危害；

（3）如何減少交通事故。

【寫作要求】

1、作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

Having drunk heavily, the writer's friend's uncle killed an old lady in an accident, which ruined two families. Thus, the writer appeals to people to attach importance to the seriousness of drunk driving and honestly follow the traffic rules.

Nowadays, many people lose their lives due to traffic accidents, which are caused by a lot of factors. Most of them are closely related to the fact that people are lacking in awareness of safety. Thus, we can see many cases such as pedestrians' crossing the road ignoring the red light and the drivers' drunk or fatigue driving.

Traffic accidents severely impact people's life. A similar experience my cousin went through a year ago can illustrate the seriousness. One evening, at a classmate reunion, he drank a lot, turning a deaf ear to others' advice. On the way home his car hit a little girl and injured her seriously. So far he is still living a life of regrets. Therefore, from my cousin's case we can see that in an accident both the offender and the victim suffer a lot from it.

As for the frequent accidents on the road, some more activities should be launched to improve people's awareness of traffic safety. In addition, more severe traffic rules and regulations should be established to fine the offenders, I think. Only in this way can traffic accidents be reduced and road safety strengthened.

【解析】這是一篇議論文寫作，主要圍繞醉駕展開，題目已大致給定范圍，主要內(nèi)容包括文章提要，醉駕原因危害及措施，考生寫作時(shí)要注意文章的條理性。文章第一句Having drunk heavily, the writer's friend's uncle killed an old lady in an accident, which ruined two families.接連使用了兩個(gè)特殊句式，Having drunk heavily是原因狀語從句的省略，which ruined two families.是which領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；第二段第一句Nowadays, many people lose their lives due to traffic accidents, which are caused by a lot of factors.使用了which領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；第二段第二句Most of them are closely related to the fact that people are lacking in awareness of safety.使用了that領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的定語從句；第三段第二句A similar experience my cousin went through a year ago can illustrate the seriousness.是省略了that的定語從句；文章最后一句Only in this way can traffic accidents be reduced and road safety strengthened.使用了一個(gè)倒裝句收束全文。在短語運(yùn)用上，使用了due to由于，be related to有關(guān)，be lacking in缺乏，go through經(jīng)歷，turn a deaf ear to不聽，as for由于，In addition此外，等諸多好短語使得文章如行云流水。在詞語運(yùn)用上，使用了Thus，Therefore，Nowadays等單詞獨(dú)立成句來起到銜接文章作用，使得文章新意連連�？偨Y(jié)：議論文寫作時(shí)重點(diǎn)在于把握文章的條理，要由淺入深說明道理，才會(huì)使得文章顯得有層次。

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