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【題目】臨近高考，為了幫助高三學生順利復習，在高考中取得好成績，某中學英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART” 專欄。假設你是該專欄的編輯 James , 收到一封署名為Anxiety的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的焦慮及困擾:近日脾氣暴躁，壓力大，晚上睡不著覺，白天無心聽課，嚴重影響了正常的學習與生活。請用英文給該同學寫一封信。

內(nèi)容要點如下：

1．表示理解并給予安慰；

2．提出建議并說明理由；

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；

3．信的開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù);

Hi Anxiety,

I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment.

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Yours,

James

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Anxiety ,

I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment. In fact, as a senior three student , it is so normal that everyone will have to face the special periods when things seem to be going worse and worse, so you don’t have to worry so much . The most important thing is to learn how to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to relax yourself and regain usual mind. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be beneficial in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal to achieve your goal.

Yours,

James

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于書信類寫作，根據(jù)提示信息和題目要求來展開。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)。寫作書信時一定要注意文章結構和層次，提出建議時要具有說服力，對于一些常用的動詞，要注意其其他形式以更為簡練的表達自己的觀點，要靈活運用各種短語和從句來豐富文章的內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如 I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment是that引導的賓語從句。In fact, as a senior three student , it is so normal that everyone will have to face the special periods when things seem to be going worse and worse使用了it引導的主語從句和when引導的定語從句的復合從句。The most important thing is to learn how to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret是so that引導的結果狀語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語 go worse and worse , control your temper, letting your anger out , regain usual mind，be beneficial in lifting your spirits等。插入語 First，Second，Last but not least，以及Here are···，I hope···句式的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。