Question

【題目】According to a new study by a Chinese newspaper, many young Chinese people are forgetting how to write their traditional Chinese characters. It is quite common that most Chinese school children grow up remembering more than 3,000 Chinese characters. However, the study shows they seldom need to write them by hand and are forgetting these characters. Instead, young people today are using their mobile phones and computers to write in a system called “pinyin” on the key board. A list of characters then appears on the screen for the writer to pick out the right one. The report said 83% of the 2,072 respondents (調(diào)查對(duì)象) have problems writing characters, while 43% said they only write when they need to sign something.

The problem is that they often take up their pens and forget the characters. Chinese characters are the oldest writing system in use in the world. They date back over 3,000 years. University student Li Hanwei, 21, said, “I can remember the shape, but I can’t remember the strokes (筆劃) when I need to write it. It’s a bit of a problem. ” The phenomenon is common in China as well as in Japan, where Chinese characters are also used in writing.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 以約120個(gè)詞就“Don’t forget Chinese characters” 為題，寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括如下要點(diǎn)：

（1）簡(jiǎn)述漢字的遺忘現(xiàn)象;

（2）簡(jiǎn)析遺忘漢字的原因；

（3）我們應(yīng)如何防止遺忘漢字，傳承中華文化。

【寫作要求】

你可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

Answer 1

【答案】

A study shows many Chinese people are forgetting how to write Chinese characters due to the fact that people seldom write them by hand and use “pinyin” system too often.

This phenomenon is becoming very common in our daily life. When it comes to writing something on paper, we may forget the exact strokes of the character. Sometimes we are able to recall the shape of the character, but we just can’t write it down correctly.

With the development of science and technology, we tend to rely too much on our mobile phones and computers. And most of us just rely on “pinyin” system to select each character. As a result, we are keeping fewer and fewer Chinese characters in our minds.

As we all know, Chinese is the oldest writing system in use today and we should protect it from dying out. Therefore, we ought to try using pens rather than computers or mobile phones to write. Besides, doing more reading can also help us memorize characters.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇是一篇命題作文為““Don’t forget Chinese characters”，根據(jù)提示信息來寫。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫，本文屬于三段式文章：提出問題，分析問題，解決問題。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。文章第一段“A study shows many Chinese people are forgetting how to write Chinese characters due to the fact that people seldom write them by hand and use “pinyin” system too often.屬于復(fù)合句，due to相當(dāng)于because，the fact that……，是用that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，整句話的意思是一個(gè)研究表明許多中國(guó)人都忘記了怎樣寫漢字，由于人們很少手寫漢字并且頻繁的用拼音打字系統(tǒng)這個(gè)事實(shí)。第三段“With the development of science and technology,”是用with引導(dǎo)的伴隨狀語，意思是隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展。本文還使用了大量短語，due to由于，When it comes to當(dāng)提到……的時(shí)候，rely on依賴于，as a result結(jié)果，protect sth. from…保護(hù)某物免于……，As we all know，正如我們都知道的那樣。最后一段的Besides另外，Therefore因此，兩個(gè)連詞的使用使文章條理更清晰，更緊湊。