假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

Our school newspaper is looking at an editor for its English edition. The job mainly consists two parts: One is to choose English articles for we students from other newspapers, magazines or the Internet. The other is pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use.

We hope what the person can meet the following requirements: First, he is willing to devote some of his or her spare time to serve others. Second, it’s necessary for him or her to be well at both English and fine arts. Beside, the ability to use the computer is important. Those who is interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union in this week.

1.at 改成for

2.consists 后加of

3.we 改成us

4.is 和pick之間加to

5.what 改成that

6.serve 改成serving

7.well 改成good

8.Beside 改成Besides

9.is 改成are

10.去掉in this week中的in

【解析】

試題分析：

1.1】句意：我們的校報(bào)正尋找一名英文編輯。look for 尋找 故at 改成for。

2.2】consist of 組成、構(gòu)成 固定搭配

3.3】for 是介詞 “為我們學(xué)生”應(yīng)翻譯成for us students, students是us的同位語(yǔ)，故we改成us。

4.4】動(dòng)詞不定式作表語(yǔ)故pick 前加to。

5.5】We hope what the person can meet the following requirements 這個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句不缺成分，故把what 改成 that。

6.6】固定搭配 devote---to--- 其中to是介詞，故把serve改成serving。

7.7】固定搭配be good at 故把well改成good。

8.8】Besides 另外、此外 ，故把 Beside改成Besides。

9.9】Those是先行詞，作主語(yǔ)，復(fù)數(shù) ，故定語(yǔ)從句中is 改成are。

10.10】in this week 中in多余，故去掉in。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。

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