Question

7．你們班同學(xué)打算周六去爬香山．請給外教Chris寫一封英文信，邀請他參加此次活動(dòng)．具體內(nèi)容如下：
1．時(shí)間：8am-5pm；
2．集合地點(diǎn)：校門口；
3．交通工具：公交車；
4．?dāng)y帶物品：雨具，午餐，相機(jī)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Chris，
             
Yours，
Joe．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To make it a green travel，we will take the bus there．為了能有一個(gè)綠色環(huán)保的旅行，我們會(huì)乘坐汽車前往．
高分句型二：
And don't forget to take some food，because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill．
不要忘記帶一些食物，因?yàn)槲覀冇?jì)劃在山頂上野餐．
句型一 To make it a green travel，該句使用了不定式位于句首作目的狀語，表明目的
句型二 ①don't forget to take some food 該句是一個(gè)祈使句，此處是祈使句的否定，在動(dòng)詞前面加don't
            ②because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill 該句是一個(gè)because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，起到解釋說明的作用

解答 Dear Chris，
   We are planning to climb the Xiangshan Hill this Saturday and sincerely invite you to go with us．（提出邀請）
   We will get together at the school gate at 8 am and probably come back at 5 pm．To make it a green travel，we will take the bus there．（高分句型一）You'd better take your camera to record the beautiful scenery．And don't forget to take some food，because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill．（高分句型二）Remember，take your umbrella or raincoat in case it rains． 
    If you can join us，we will be very happy．
   Yours，
   Joe

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