Question

20．假定你是李華，你通過MSN得知去年曾在你�？妥�教授英語的Jack Wood 最近在打籃球時摔倒嚴(yán)重傷了右肩，你很掛念他的傷情并告知他你看到了他的博客（Traveling Along The Old Silk Road in Gansu）．請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：
1）慰問他的傷情；
2）簡要評論他的博客；
3）對他曾經(jīng)的教學(xué)印象深刻，獲益匪淺，希望今后多聯(lián)系．
注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；
2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3）開頭及結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack Wood，
How worried I am to hear the news that you had your right shoulder injured seriously after falling down while playing basketball．      
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為書信．
寫作要點為：1）慰問他的傷情；
2）簡要評論他的博客；
3）對他曾經(jīng)的教學(xué)印象深刻，獲益匪淺，希望今后多聯(lián)系．

解答 One of the possible versions：
Dear Jack Wood，
How worried I am to hear the news that you had your right shoulder injured seriously after falling down while playing basketball．
I'm anxious to know more about your injury，wondering whether you are feeling any better now．And I also want to say how excited I am when I read your blogs---Travelling Along the Old Silk Road in Gansu．You mentioned lots of places of interest in my hometown，most of which I've never been to．What a pity!I believe your vivid description and beautiful pictures make my hometown known to more people．They are worth reading．Up to now，I still have been impressed with your interesting and attractive English classes and I really benefited a lot．
Looking forward to hearing from you and expecting you to recover as soon as possible!
 Sincerely yours，
Li Hua

點評 考生需熟悉書信格式．考生需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．