Question

【題目】作為一名高三學(xué)生的你，明年即將畢業(yè)�，F(xiàn)在校報(bào)征稿，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)高三生活的體會(huì)和建議。

1. 對(duì)老師與家長(zhǎng)的關(guān)愛(ài)表示感謝；

2. 向與自己發(fā)生過(guò)矛盾的同學(xué)表達(dá)歉意；

3. 努力學(xué)習(xí)，實(shí)現(xiàn)人生夢(mèng)想；

4. 對(duì)學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議。

注意：

1. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)：100 左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）。

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t long before I graduate. _______________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate. Considering what the past three years has taught me, I have much to share with my fellow students.

As I look back on my experience in the past three years, time rewinds. Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains."

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇演講稿，屬于提綱類作文。人稱應(yīng)使用第一人稱。時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章首句已寫(xiě)好，文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).可以用一些表示并列的詞或遞進(jìn)的詞進(jìn)行連接。如：First of all，Secondly， What’s more等詞。其中“(4)對(duì)學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議”部分，需要自己發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)出一、二點(diǎn)建議即可。屬于半開(kāi)放型作文。同樣可用一些詞進(jìn)行層次連接注意演講稿的格式及稱呼語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】(1)使用一些如Firstly，Secondly，thirdly ，finally等承接詞進(jìn)行連接,層次清晰。(2)使用了一些高級(jí)句型，如it’s high time to。。。，及虛擬語(yǔ)氣的運(yùn)用Without their help and advice my life would be different.(3)諺語(yǔ)、名言的運(yùn)用，如：as the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains”,”time and tide wait for no men”(4)高級(jí)詞匯及短語(yǔ)的使用，如make up one’s mind,make every effort，make full use of 等