Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你們班就“高一新生是否有必要進行為期一周的軍訓”進行討論。請你給你校英文報的編輯寫一封電子郵件，反映你們的討論情況。

1.支持者85％，理由…….

2.反對者15％ 理由…….

3.你的看法…….

注意：1.參考詞匯 military training軍訓

2. 詞數(shù)100左右;

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one-week military training.

Yours,

Lihua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one-week military training. Different students hold different attitudes to it/Students’ views on it vary from person to person.

Some hold that it is necessary. On one hand, it can improve student’s teamwork spirit , which will play an important part in their life and study. On the other hand, there is no doubt that they become stronger physically and mentally through the training.

However, the others have opposite views. They think it is a waste of time. Besides, students get burnt easily without any protection in the sun.

As far as I’m concerned, though we may feel tired during the training , it goes without saying that the one-week military training is meaningful.

【解析】

試題分析：假定你是李華，你們班就“高一新生是否有必要進行為期一周的軍訓”進行討論。請你給你校英文報的編輯寫一封電子郵件，反映你們的討論情況。1.支持者85％，理由…….2.反對者15％ 理由…….3.你的看法…….

【亮點說明】本文是一篇電子郵件，格式正確，共四段，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，運用高級句子。on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one-week military training.介詞on后面用whether引導(dǎo)賓語從句；it can improve student’s teamwork spirit , which will play an important part in their life and study. Which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；there is no doubt that---，使用固定句式；As far as I’m concerned, though we may feel tired during the training , it goes without saying that the one-week military training is meaningful.劃線部分的運用堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，On one hand, On the other hand, However, Besides,為文章增色添彩。