【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A wise man once told a happy and satisfied farmer that if he had a diamond as bigger as a thumb , he could have his own city , and if he had a diamond the size of his fist , he could be the owner of his country . The wise man left , the farmer sold his farm and left his family in the search of his intended diamonds . He looked across the country and couldn’t find a single one . He was so disappointing that he threw him into the river . Meanwhile , one morning the new owner of the farm was fed his camels by the stream when he found a stone shinning in the water . He returned for the stone and was told it was a diamond . To everyone’s astonish , the farm was in fact covered with countless diamond .

【答案】

【1】bigger-big

【2】在 the farmer 前面加and 或在left 前面加 having

【3】刪除 in the search of 中的 the

【4】and-but

【5】disappointing-disappointed

【6】 him-himself

【7】fed-feeding

【8】for-with

【9】astonish—astonishment

【10】diamond—diamonds

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，講述了一個(gè)農(nóng)場(chǎng)主有眼不識(shí)泰山，生活在一個(gè)滿是鉆石的地方，卻到其他地方去找鉆石，最后還丟了性命。

【1】bigger-big 考查形容詞。在as..as結(jié)構(gòu)中要使用形容詞或副詞的原級(jí)，所以使用原級(jí)形容詞big。

【2】在 the farmer 前面加and 或在left 前面加 having 考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)。可以在the farmer前面加and形成并列結(jié)構(gòu)，也可以在left前面加having，構(gòu)成獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，該結(jié)構(gòu)相當(dāng)于一個(gè)從句。

【3】刪除 in the search of 中的 the考查固定搭配。短語in search of尋找，原文中的定冠詞the是多余的。

【4】and-but 考查連詞。句意：他橫穿全國(guó)，的是沒有找到這樣的鉆石。根據(jù)句意可知上下文之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以使用連詞but而不是and。

【5】 disappointing-disappointed 考查形容詞�，F(xiàn)在分詞disappointing轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞通常修飾事物，而過去分詞disappointed轉(zhuǎn)換而來的形容詞常常修飾人，本句的主語是he，說明這是對(duì)人進(jìn)行修飾的形容詞，所以使用disappointed。

【6】. him-himself 考查反身代詞。本句中使用反身代詞himself做動(dòng)詞throw的賓語。，表示他跳進(jìn)了河里。

【7】fed-feeding 考查謂語動(dòng)詞。動(dòng)詞feed喂養(yǎng)，該動(dòng)詞和句子主語the owner之間構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以應(yīng)該使用現(xiàn)在分詞做謂語動(dòng)詞，表示過去進(jìn)行時(shí)。

【8】for-with 考查介詞。本句中的介詞with表示“攜帶”，句意：他帶著石頭回來了，卻被告知這是一顆鉆石。

【9】astonish—astonishment 考查固定短語。短語to one's astonishment讓某人驚訝的是，介詞to的后面要接名詞做賓語。

【10】diamond—diamonds 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。名詞diamond鉆石，是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞，前面有形容詞countless“數(shù)不清的”，說明該詞應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式diamonds。

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