Question

10．寫作內(nèi)容
近日，校巴安全已成為了一個嚴(yán)重的問題，并得到人們越來越多的關(guān)注．你們班同學(xué)就其造成的原因及解決方法進(jìn)行了討論，結(jié)果如下：
主要原因：1．超載  2．超速  3．安全意識淡�。�
主要解決的方法：1．學(xué)校及幼兒園加強校巴安全檢查2．阻止危險車輛上路3．重視安全教育以提高安全意識．
寫作要求
1．以上述信息為材料寫一段五句話的短文；
2．句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，語言表達(dá)流暢、連貫．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 亮點句型一：Recently the safety of school buses has become a serious problem，which has attracted more and more public attention．最近校車的安全問題已成為一個嚴(yán)重的問題．此句中which引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語從句，which指代前面整個句子的意思．
亮點句型二：Finally，we all think that only when all people pay great attention to safety education and only when we all raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decrease．最后，我們都認(rèn)為只有當(dāng)所有人都注意教育安全，只有我們提高安全意識才能減少交通事故．此句中when引導(dǎo)的并列時間狀語從句被only修飾，主句要用部分倒裝，所以can被提前．

解答 Recently the safety of school buses has become a serious problem，which has attracted more and more public attention．（亮點句型一）So in our class we have held a heated discussion on the causes and solutions．After the discussion，we find that the problem is mainly caused by overloading，overspeeding and weak （lack of）safety awareness．【闡明問題】As for the solutions，we all think that schools and kindergartens should be required to examine the safety of the school buses．Besides，schools and kindergartens should try to stop risky buses from being operated．Finally，we all think that only when all people pay great attention to safety education and only when we all raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decrease（亮點句型二）．【解決問題】

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．