Question

19．Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
復(fù)旦大學(xué)一研究生因平時(shí)瑣事和同學(xué)不和，在寢室飲用水里投毒，導(dǎo)致一室友死亡．作為即將踏入大學(xué)校門的你，談?wù)労屯瑢W(xué)和諧相處的重要性以及你的一些建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；
2．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱，
3．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)．
A graduate of Fudan University didn't get on well with his roommates for trivial．So he put some poison in the drinking water，killing one of his roommates．A graduate of Fudan University didn't get on well with his roommate for trivial．He put some poison in the drinking water，killing one of his roommates．The social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college．（高分句型一）There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious campus life．The first thing to do is to communicate，which brings a better understanding among classmates．What's more，you'll have to share with each other．Spend your time sharing your dreams and thoughts with your classmates，and your relationship will be much closer．Most important of all，you should learn to tolerate and be considerate．Only in this way can you live a happy life with your classmates in college．（高分句型二）
In conclusion，getting along well with your classmates in college is considered greatly important．A harmonious campus life will help us have a good mood and enjoy being together．An unpleasant life will not only make your life influenced but also disturb others'．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：The social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college．關(guān)于如何與同學(xué)和睦相處這個(gè)問(wèn)題已經(jīng)引起了許多即將進(jìn)入大學(xué)生活的高三學(xué)生的廣泛關(guān)注．
高分句型二：Only in this way can you live a happy life with your classmates in college
只有這樣，你才能在大學(xué)里和同學(xué)一起度過(guò)快樂(lè)的日子．
句型一 who are on the way to college．使用了定語(yǔ)從句，對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行修飾限制．
句型二 Only in this way can you live a happy life…此處使用了倒裝句式，當(dāng)only位于句首修飾介詞短語(yǔ)時(shí)
另外還使用了大量的銜接過(guò)渡詞句，如：the first thing、What's more、most important of all和In conclusion等使語(yǔ)言更加連貫．

解答 A graduate of Fudan University didn't get on well with his roommate for trivial．He put some poison in the drinking water，killing one of his roommates．The social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college．（高分句型一）There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious campus life．The first thing to do is to communicate，which brings a better understanding among classmates．What's more，you'll have to share with each other．Spend your time sharing your dreams and thoughts with your classmates，and your relationship will be much closer．Most important of all，you should learn to tolerate and be considerate．Only in this way can you live a happy life with your classmates in college．（高分句型二）
In conclusion，getting along well with your classmates in college is considered greatly important．A harmonious campus life will help us have a good mood and enjoy being together．An unpleasant life will not only make your life influenced but also disturb others'．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文，根據(jù)提示信息來(lái)介紹自己的看法．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)．2、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．3、注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．