Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
The suitable clothes can make men handsome and make women attractive, so more and more people spend much money on clothes.
Thanks to the fashion designers, many different styles of clothes appear every day. If you go to a big store or walk on the street, you'll find many fashionable clothes easily.
Of course everyone has his or her own way of dressing. Perhaps the most popular clothes are casual ones. They're made of cotton and there are many types of designs. They feel comfortable, so men and women as well as the young and the old enjoy wearing them. Some casual clothes don't need dry-cleaning, so they can save us money.
Not everyone can wear casual clothes at any time and any place. Some people have to wear uniforms when they're at work such as police officers, soldiers, firefighters and pilots. Uniforms can not only protect them but also show good discipline.
It doesn't matter what kinds of clothes you wear. It's important for everyone to dress neatly and suitable (合適地).
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這篇短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
2．以約120個(gè)詞就我們現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中衣著的話題談你的想法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你個(gè)人對(duì)待衣著重要性的理解；
（2）舉例說明你對(duì)衣服潮流(fashion)的看法；
（3）你怎樣看待身邊部分同學(xué)對(duì)名牌服裝的追求。
【寫作要求】
1．可以使用實(shí)例來支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

This passage tells us that though people dress differently in everyday life, what matters most is that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion.
Personally speaking, I totally agree with the writer. It is obvious that we should not dress too casually. It is necessary for every one of us to dress properly on different occasions. In schools, students are often required to wear school uniforms, but when they are out of school, they should not care too much about what to wear. I have friends who only buy and wear clothes of famous brands and never think about their high prices. Some young people are always trying to keep up with the fashion and also care too much about their dressing. I think it is not worthwhile.
In a word, as students in schools, it is always important that we dress neatly and properly every day. We should also remember to pay more attention to our studies.

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)，考生首先要?dú)w納短文大意，提煉出討論的中心思想，然后再根據(jù)這一中心思想在做詳細(xì)討論。
本文的話題是對(duì)生活中的衣著進(jìn)行的說明，屬于議論文，所以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)和第三人稱，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候使用第一人稱。
要點(diǎn)：1.短文內(nèi)容：雖然在生活中，我們天天都穿衣服，但是重要的是我們要穿著整潔恰當(dāng)而不是奇裝異服。2.對(duì)于衣著重要性的理解：要根據(jù)不同的場合穿著不同的服裝，這是個(gè)人修養(yǎng)的表現(xiàn)。3.舉例說明對(duì)衣服潮流的看法：有人總是在追時(shí)尚，但是顯得不倫不類，穿衣服最重要的是得體。4.對(duì)于學(xué)生來說最重要的是學(xué)習(xí)成績，而不是穿著。
寫作說明：本對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文中高級(jí)句式的使用仍然是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，如：though people dress differently in everyday life, what matters most is that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion句中的讓步狀語從句：though people dress differently in everyday life，主語從句what matters most。以及表語從句that we should dress neatly and properly instead of caring too much about the quality and fashion。以后的寫作中要注意多使用高級(jí)句式。