Question

3．假如你是李津，最近你在瀏覽一個美國中學生網(wǎng)站時，看到一個名叫Stephen的中學生的留言，他計劃在暑假期間到中國的一些文化特色鮮明的地方來旅游，希望能有一名中國學生做他的導游．你對此很感興趣，請根據(jù)以下要點提示寫一封E-mail給他，介紹你的相關情況．
1．如何得知他的愿望；
2．希望做他的導游；
3．如何給他做導游；
4．期盼他的回復．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于l00：
2．請勿提及真實學校名稱；
3．可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
4．開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
名勝places of interests
Dear Stephen，
      ．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Because you want to travel some places with deep and thick culture，and I'm familiar with these places，such as Beijing，Shandong，and Shanxi，I'll be your perfect guide．
高分句型二：
I'll show you around many places of interests introducing a large number of old buildings，traditional customs，special cultural activities to you．
句型一 Because you want to travel some places…該句是一個由because引導的原因狀語從句，在and后面的簡單句謂語部分使用了固定短語：be familiar with對..熟悉．．
句型二 I'll show you around many places of interests introducing a large number of old buildings…該句中有以下一些重要的短語和固定用法：show sb around sp 帶某人參觀某地  places of interests  名勝古跡 a large number of 許多

解答 Dear Stephen，
        Recently，when I surfed a senior high school website of the USA，I saw the message you posted on it．I know you have planned to travel to China and need a student to serve as your guide．I'm writing to apply for the job．（寫作目的）Because you want to travel some places with deep and thick culture，and I'm familiar with these places，such as Beijing，Shandong，and Shanxi，I'll be your perfect guide．（高分句型一）
     I'll show you around many places of interests introducing a large number of old buildings，traditional customs，special cultural activities to you．（高分句型二）You will have a deeper impression of these places．And I'll also invite you to play and talk with the local people to learn more about their life．I think I can help you with your communication well．
     All in all，I hope you'll believe in me and my excellent ability of guiding．（提出期望）Looking forward to your immediate reply．
 Yours，
 Li Jin

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，寫作時考生應將所給要點與主題緊密聯(lián)系在一起，可適當?shù)陌l(fā)散思維，用準確的語言，簡潔明了的話將文章闡述清楚．