Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上英語(yǔ)老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

Generally speaking, I’m a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.

I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.

In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.

Answer 1

【答案】

Generally speaking, I’m a person who have (has)the ability to control myself. Whether at school and(or) at home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything (something) somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good(well) with others.

I think it is determination what(that) is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.

In order加 to control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule (rules)to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on your behaviors, which makes the (a)difference in helping you be responsible to (for)what you do.

【解析】

一般說來，我是一個(gè)有自制力的人。不管是在家還是在學(xué)校，我都很清楚地知道什么該做，什么不該做，而且總是專注于我的學(xué)習(xí)。

【1】have→has考查定語(yǔ)從句。Who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾a person，故謂語(yǔ)用第三人稱單數(shù)。

【2】and→or考查關(guān)聯(lián)詞。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境，此處句意為不管是在學(xué)�；蛟诩遥瑑烧咧�間是二選一的關(guān)系，而and表示并列的關(guān)系，改為or。

【3】去掉the考察定冠詞。定冠詞the表示特定的某個(gè)人或某個(gè)物，而這里one of the top students并不表示特指，the多余，去掉the。

【4】anything→something考查代詞。Anything表示任何事，任何人，多用于否定句和疑問句，something表示一些人，一些事。符合題意。

【5】good→well考查副詞。Good是形容詞，表示好的，好；well是副詞，表示好的，好；此處的good修飾動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)get along with others“與他人相處融洽”，用副詞修飾，改為well。

【6】what→that考查連詞。What多引導(dǎo)名詞性從句，如賓語(yǔ)從句，表語(yǔ)從句，同位語(yǔ)從句等，但通常都在從句中扮演某些成分；that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句時(shí)通常用it作主語(yǔ)，從句后置，不做成分且無意義；分析句子，從句的主語(yǔ)是a determination，that無意義，但不可省略。

【7】order后加to考查固定搭配。In order to “為了”，固定搭配，通常用于句首。

【8】rule→rules考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。Some表示“一些”，修飾的名詞用復(fù)數(shù)，rule改為rules。

【9】the→a考查固定搭配。The定冠詞，特指某人或某物；a是不定冠詞，表示“一個(gè)”；make a difference“有影響，有關(guān)系”，make the difference“有影響，很重要”，強(qiáng)調(diào)產(chǎn)生了差別。

【10】to→for考查固定搭配。Be responsible for sth“對(duì)某事負(fù)責(zé)”；be responsible to sb“對(duì)某人負(fù)責(zé)”。