Question

某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動請你根據(jù)下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題,用英語寫一篇120字左右的短文

過去1.生活貧困,房屋破舊

2.污染嚴重,垃圾滿地

3.交通不便,游客很少

現(xiàn)在1.生活:住房寬敞、明亮;許多人有自己的汽車

2.環(huán)境:山更綠,水更清,天更藍......

3.旅游:每年有成千上萬來自世界各地的游客

將來請你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來

注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)具體的地名,否則扣分;2.標題和開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);3.生詞:環(huán)境environment; 污染pollution;方便convenient.

Answer 1

The Changes of My Hometown

In the past , My hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life.

Their houses are larger and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.

I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】這是一篇說明文寫作。主要描述家鄉(xiāng)過去與現(xiàn)在的變化，并表達自己對家鄉(xiāng)未來的期望。題目已經(jīng)給定大致內(nèi)容，寫作時要注意適當增加內(nèi)容，以保證文章的連貫性。注重高級詞匯的運用與文章的結(jié)構(gòu)邏輯。文章分為四段，分別寫了家鄉(xiāng)過去的景象，現(xiàn)在的改變和我對家鄉(xiāng)未來的期望。文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次分明，邏輯清晰。文章長短句交錯，使行文富于變化。文章時態(tài)使用和轉(zhuǎn)換都非常恰當，第一段寫家鄉(xiāng)的過去全部使用過去時，表示那些景象是以前存在的。第二段寫家鄉(xiāng)的現(xiàn)狀，運用現(xiàn)在完成時，表示這些改變已經(jīng)完成并且現(xiàn)在的現(xiàn)狀就是這樣。最后一段運用將來時表示對家鄉(xiāng)未來的展望。第二段第一句運用great change做主語，使用被動語態(tài)，更符合英語表達習(xí)慣。第二段第三句運用greener，clearer，bluer一系列比較級表現(xiàn)了家鄉(xiāng)具體的變化。第三段第三句中thousands of people數(shù)以千計的人，all over the world全世界，become better and better變得越來越好這些都屬于高級詞匯，為文章增色不少�？偨Y(jié)：要多使用高級詞匯，文章要有層次感，語言要富于變化。

考點：考查說明文寫作。