Question

假設(shè)你是李華，作為選派的交流學(xué)生在美國(guó)某中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，剛回到國(guó)內(nèi)�；貒�(guó)后，你發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的一本英語(yǔ)詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫(xiě)了一封信，請(qǐng)他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內(nèi)容如下：

  *感謝在美國(guó)期間他所提供的幫助

  *一本英語(yǔ)詞典忘記帶回

  *詞典是美國(guó)老師送的，非常珍貴

  *詞典很可能丟在臥室的書(shū)架上

  *郵資自己付

注意：

1、詞數(shù)100左右；信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。

2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫

 參考詞匯：郵資-postage

Dear Mr. Brown,

__________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

                                                Yours, Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mr. Brown,

   How is everything going?

   I’m the Chinese exchange student who lived in your homefor a year. Thanks for all the help you provided during my stay in America. Your family were very kind, and I will never forget the help you have given me, and the happiness we’ve shared.

   After i arrived home, I found that my English dictionary was left behind. The dictionary was a gift from my American English teacher. It is quite valuable to me, and I hope you can send it to me. I think you will find it on the bookshelf in the bedroom where I stayed. I will gladly pay the postage.

   China is a beautiful country, and I hope that one day you can come to visit me in my home.

   Thanks and all the best.

                                                             Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：作文是比較常見(jiàn)的書(shū)信格式，難度不大；所有要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)，注意書(shū)信的格式要正確；作文要包含所有的要點(diǎn)，行文要連貫，突出對(duì)布朗先生提供的幫助表示誠(chéng)摯的謝意，并邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)中國(guó)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】How is everything going?一句日常問(wèn)候的話語(yǔ)，拉近雙方的距離。范文使用了定語(yǔ)從句，如“who lived in your homefor a year, you provided during my stay in America, where I stayed”，顯示了語(yǔ)法功底。Thanks and all the best.再次感謝并表達(dá)美好的祝愿，以此來(lái)顯示作者的對(duì)布朗先生的禮貌和敬意。

考點(diǎn)：書(shū)信類材料作文