Question

15．假如你是中學(xué)生王平，現(xiàn)打算競(jìng)選你校國(guó)際青年志愿者組織新一屆主席．請(qǐng)按以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇參選演講稿．
1．自己的性格及能力；               2．對(duì)該組織校內(nèi)活動(dòng)的設(shè)想；
3．對(duì)該組織國(guó)際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想；    4．呼吁支持，做出承諾．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100字左右：演講稿的開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總此數(shù)．
      2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：競(jìng)選run for  國(guó)際青年志愿者組織  the International Youth Volunteers
Good afternoon，my dear friends!
My Name is Wang Ping． 
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Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Easy-going，supportive and decisive，I'm a man of strong leadership．
該句在表達(dá)自己性格時(shí)，使用了三個(gè)形容詞，隨和的、有支持的、有決策的做狀語(yǔ)，修飾主語(yǔ)．
（高分句型二）I'll also contact American Volunteer Organization in Wild Animal Protection，which will probably offer us the chances to do volunteer work in America．
該句中which引導(dǎo) 一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞 American Volunteer Organization in Wild Animal Protection．
高級(jí)詞匯：Easy-going，supportive and decisive隨和的，有支持的、有決策的；influential 有影響力的；
Honored感到光榮的；

解答 Good afternoon，my dear friends!
     My Name is Wang Ping．I'm here to run for Chairman of the International Youth Volunteers of our school．（高分句型一）Easy-going，supportive and decisive，（此處介紹自己性格） I'm a man of strong leadership．For the past months，I've helped our organization to carry out many successful and influential volunteering activities．Honored to be chairman，（我的設(shè)想）I'll invite some successful youngsters in volunteer work to present us lectures and share their amazing experiences as volunteers．Besides，（高分句型二）I'll also contact American Volunteer Organization in Wild Animal Protection，which will probably offer us the chances to do volunteer work in America．Dear friends，my performance will deserve your decision．（做出承諾）Please give me your support and you will see more success of our organization．Thank you!

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