Question

4．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，校報(bào)準(zhǔn)備辦一個(gè)關(guān)于冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)的英語板塊，現(xiàn)面向全體學(xué)生招募一名英語編輯．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一封信：
1．表示對(duì)此職位感興趣；
2．說明自己的愛好和特長(zhǎng)，如喜歡冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)，擅長(zhǎng)英語，樂于與人溝通合作等；
3．表示希望能擔(dān)任此職位．
字?jǐn)?shù)：100-120左右；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；信的開頭和落款已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear editor，
Recently，I've learned that the school newspaper is looking for an English editor of winter sports section．
                                   
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一） Being a student with high responsibility，I believe I am quite qualified for this position．
該句型使用了動(dòng)名詞充當(dāng)句子主語，即being a student…
（高分句型二）I will let more people know about winter sports，making them interested in such activities
  句子里making them interested…是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，表示結(jié)果．
（高分句型三） I would appreciate it if I could be accepted as an editor，
使用了固定句型I would appreciate it if 如果…我會(huì)很感激的．
高級(jí)詞匯：responsibility 責(zé)任感；be qualified for 勝任；be fit for 適合．
First of all首先；Besides此外；Finally最后．

解答 Dear editor，
     Recently，I'v learned that the school newspaper is looking for an English editor of winter sports section．I'm interested in this position very much．（首先表明感興趣）
    （高分句型一） Being a student with high responsibility，I believe I am quite qualified for this position．（列舉特長(zhǎng)1）First of all，I am fond of winter sports．I  have gone skiing with my family for several years．（列舉特長(zhǎng)2）Besides，I am good at English and I  once won the first prize in our school contest．Therefore，I think I'm fit for the job．（列舉特長(zhǎng)3）Finally，as an editor，（高分句型二）I will let more people know about winter sports，making them interested in such activities．
  （高分句型三） I would appreciate it if I could be accepted as an editor，and I'm looking forward to your reply．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文實(shí)際上是對(duì)考生的思路以及文章的寫作范圍給出了明確的限定，因此考生在寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時(shí)進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮；要根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；注意句子的時(shí)態(tài)，詞語的豐富和句型的多樣性．