Question

19．假設你是高二學生李華，得知某英文報招聘一名兼職記者，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一封自薦信申請得到這個職位．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．寫信目的；
2．申請理由（語言優(yōu)勢，性格優(yōu)點，相關經(jīng)歷…）；
3．希望獲準．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫并注意語言的得體性．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am a middle school student in Grade Two．I'm glad to learn that you want a part-time English reporter．I am writing to introduce myself．
I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）First，I have a good command of the English language．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．
I am sure I have the qualifications for the position．I would be grateful if you could offer me the chance．
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設你是高二學生李華，得知某英文報招聘一名兼職記者，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一封自薦信申請得到這個職位，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：寫信目的；申請理由（語言優(yōu)勢，性格優(yōu)點，相關經(jīng)歷…）；希望獲準．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：look for尋找；have a good command of精通；Besides另外；get along with 與…相處；do well in在…方面做得好；Above all最重要的是；Look forward to盼望；
I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）
I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）
Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am a middle school student in Grade Two．I'm glad to learn that you want a part-time English reporter．I am writing to introduce myself．
       I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）First，I have a good command of the English language．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．
       I am sure I have the qualifications for the position．I would be grateful if you could offer me the chance．
       Looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．