Question

在英語(yǔ)課上，你喜歡你的老師授課時(shí)只用英語(yǔ)，還是英語(yǔ)、漢語(yǔ)兼用？某英語(yǔ)雜志社就此話題邀請(qǐng)中小學(xué)生發(fā)表看法。請(qǐng)你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?” 這個(gè)問(wèn)題，參考所給要點(diǎn)，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

授課形式一：只用英語(yǔ) 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：有助于提高聽(tīng)說(shuō)能力等…… 缺憾; 不易聽(tīng)懂等…… 結(jié)論：……

授課形式二：英語(yǔ)、漢語(yǔ)兼用 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：易于理解等…… 缺憾：英語(yǔ)氛圍不濃等…… 結(jié)論： ……

 
注意：
詞數(shù)100—120，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：atmosphere 氛圍
I prefer my English classes to be taught in __________________________________

Answer 1

One possible version:
I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well. Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment. When English is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportunities to practise listening and speaking. Therefore, we will be able to learn more quickly.
However, there are also some problems with this teaching method. As we haven’t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learners may even lose interest in English.
Practice makes perfect. To learn English well requires a lot of practice. So, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English.

解析試題分析：本文是篇議論文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，議論文通常要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要求讓你就英語(yǔ)授課還是漢語(yǔ)授課問(wèn)題發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)，因此本文必須用第一人稱提出我的看法。用一些人.....；另一些人....。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如prefer... to be, As we all know, provide ...with... 還有Practice makes perfect. 同時(shí)還運(yùn)用了find it adj to do sth; if,when .as引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如： therefore, however ,so等等。
考點(diǎn)：圖表作文。