在學(xué)校組織的“感動(dòng)校園人物”評(píng)選活動(dòng)中,你班經(jīng)過(guò)討論,決定推薦李華參加評(píng)選。請(qǐng)按以下要求寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的文章。內(nèi)容包括:
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2.列舉1-2個(gè)事例。
注意:文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
After a heated discussion, our class has decided to recommend Li Hua as the Touching Figure on Campus.
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After a heated discussion, our class has decided to recommend Li Hua as the Touching Figure On Campus.
We have every reason to believe he is qualified for the honour. First, Li Hua is always willing to offer us help whenever necessary. Besides, his great devotion to work as monitor makes our class a best place to study in. However, what has impressed us most is his unconditional love to poor children. Last summer vacation, he volunteered to teach English in a small village, which has inspired many other students to join in and thus helped open up a new world to those children as well.
  All in all, his selfless love touches our heart and his action suggests that even small efforts can make a difference to those in need. Therefore, we strongly support Li Hua as the Touching Figure On Campus.

試題分析:這是一篇提綱式作文:要求寫(xiě)一篇文章推薦李華參加評(píng)選“感動(dòng)校園人物”,考生首先要認(rèn)真審題,認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系,然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。因?yàn)橹皇翘峋V,所以要根據(jù)所給提綱,列出要點(diǎn),并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力,靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí),采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái),注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性?忌仨氄J(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況,有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】We have every reason to believe he is qualified for the honour.這句話用了詞組have every reason to do sth“有理由做…” 和be qualified for“合格”, Li Hua is always willing to offer us help whenever necessary.這句話用了省略句, his great devotion to work as monitor makes our class a best place to study in. 這句話用了不定式做定語(yǔ),what has impressed us most is his unconditional love to poor children.這句話用了主語(yǔ)從句和表語(yǔ)從句, Last summer vacation, he volunteered to teach English in a small village, which has inspired many other students to join in and thus helped open up a new world to those children as well.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句, All in all, his selfless love touches our heart and his action suggests that even small efforts can make a difference to those in need. 這句話用了詞組:make a difference to“對(duì)…產(chǎn)生影響”,還有文章還使用了First, Besides, However, Therefore,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞,使文章更加連貫。
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