Question

1．假如你是李華．你的美國朋友John來信說，將來你所在的城市任教，請你幫他找一處合適的房子．請根據(jù)下面的提示和圖畫給他回一封信，介紹你所找的這套房子的情況，并征求他的意見．（1）房屋所在的位置和周邊環(huán)境；（2）房屋的結(jié)構(gòu)；（3）房內(nèi)設(shè)施；（4）房租價(jià)格．

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear John，
     I'm very glad to hear that you will come to work in our city．
                                                                                    Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 人稱和時(shí)態(tài)：
本文是一篇應(yīng)用文--電子郵件，應(yīng)該以第一人稱口吻回復(fù)電子郵件；在介紹房子的信息時(shí)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
（1）房屋所在的位置和周邊環(huán)境；
 （2）房屋的結(jié)構(gòu)；
 （3）房內(nèi)設(shè)施；
（4）房租價(jià)格．
（5）征求John的意見．
重要短語及句型：
on the fifth floor：在五樓
in the center of：在…中心
What's more：此外，而且
be equipped with：裝備有
the living facilities：生活設(shè)施
no more than：僅僅
a real bargain：挺劃算的買賣
There is a supermarket，a hospital and a bus stop，making it convenient for you to live here．那里有一家超市、一家醫(yī)院和一個公共汽車站臺，這使得你在這里生活非常方便．
The rent is 1000yuan per month，which is a real bargain．房租每個月100元，是很劃算的買賣．

解答 I'm very glad to hear that you will come to work in our city．You said you wanted to rent a house，and I've found one．
    The house is on the fifth floor of a six-story building in the center of our city．Around it，there is a supermarket，a hospital and a bus stop，making it convenient for you to live here（房屋所在的位置和周邊環(huán)境）．What's more，the house contains a living room，two bedrooms，one kitchen and one toilet（房屋的結(jié)構(gòu)）．Besides，it is equipped with all the living facilities such as natural gas，furniture，air-conditioners and so on（房內(nèi)設(shè)施）．Moreover，the rent is no more than 1000yuan per month，which is a real bargain（房租價(jià)格）．
    If you are not satisfied with the house，I'll try to find another for you（征求John的意見）．Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                          
                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評 寫作時(shí)首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；審要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)題目的要求審要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)要包括文字中的要點(diǎn)，也要包括圖片或表格中的主要信息．其次要考慮詞語和句型的選用，詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．