Question

5．下面兩幅圖反映的是部分城鄉(xiāng)孩子所面臨的窘境．請(qǐng)就此圖談?wù)勀愕南敕�，你的文章�?yīng)包括：
具體描述兩幅圖；
簡(jiǎn)要分析造成這兩種現(xiàn)象的原因；
提出解決問(wèn)題的建議．
（注：請(qǐng)勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What he wishes is that he didn't go to school any more．他希望再不去學(xué)校上學(xué)．
高分句型二：
What they face is the endless homework，which puts so much pressure on them that some students don't want to continue their studies．他們所面對(duì)的是無(wú)盡的作業(yè)，那些給他們帶去了很大的壓力以至于有些學(xué)生不想再繼續(xù)他們的學(xué)業(yè)．
句型一  ①What he wishes 該句是一個(gè)由what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，what在從句中充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)
           ②that he didn't go to school any more 該句是一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，that在句中只作引導(dǎo)詞，不作句中成分
句型二 ①What they face is the endless homework 該句是一個(gè)由what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，what在從句中充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)
            ②which puts so much pressure on them…該句是一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which在從句中作主語(yǔ)，替代先行詞pressure

解答 The two pictures show some problems in the present education system in China．A student is on his way home from school，a heavy bad of books on his back．What he wishes is that he didn't go to school any more．（高分句型一）In the second picture，a peasant boy，carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw，is out of breath under the great pressure．He hopes to attend school．
   The children in cities can enjoy bright classroom and adequate facilities．What they face is the endless homework，which puts so much pressure on them that some students don't want to continue their studies．（高分句型二）However，in the countryside，especiall in some western parts，some children are forced to drop out because their parents cann't afford the tution．（分析原因）
   As far as I am concerned，the students in the city should cherish the chance，trying their best to study．what's more，the government should take measures to ganrantee the study of the students in the countryside．In that way，all the children can receive equal education．（提出辦法）

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