分析 本文采用了"材料+提綱類(lèi)"形式,根據(jù)文章所給材料提示信息寫(xiě)一篇短文,闡述對(duì)所給材料中反映的問(wèn)題的觀點(diǎn).寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):1.分析材料;2.分析原因;3.闡述自己的觀點(diǎn). 既是材料作文又是提綱類(lèi)作文.
寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主.人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主.
重要短語(yǔ):at least(至少),the purpose of…(…的目的),the last but two (倒數(shù)第三),cause sth (引起某物),lead to (導(dǎo)致),in one's opinion (某人認(rèn)為…),get rid of(去除),as long as (只要),master the skill(掌握技巧).
【高分句型一】
1.Any student①who can get 96 out of 100 points must be a good student ②because at least he nearly knows all the knowledge.
①此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,先行詞為"any student",關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語(yǔ).
②此處是由連詞"because"引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句,主句為"Any student must be a good student".
【高分句型二】
2.It is the ranking that tells which students are good and which students are bad.
此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型,如果去掉強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的骨架"It was/is …that",原句句子成分齊全,句意通順.
【高分句型三】
3.And①it is the ranking that leads to the fact②that the students ③who are good become bad students.
①此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型,如果去掉強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的骨架"It was/is …that",原句句子成分齊全,句意通順.
②此處是同位語(yǔ)從句,連詞"that"引導(dǎo)的句子解釋說(shuō)明"the fact"的具體內(nèi)容.
③此處為關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,"who"在從句中作主語(yǔ),先行詞為"the students".
【高分句型四】
4.As long as we master the skill or the knowledge,we are good students.
此處為連詞"as long as"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句,主句為"we are good students".
解答 Any student who can get 96 out of 100 points must be a good student because at least he nearly knows all the knowledge.【高分句型一】And that's the purpose of the test.However,after the student's mother heard that her son was the last but two,she of course would not be happy.She was sad.(分析材料)
What caused the trouble?The answer is the ranking.It is the ranking that tells which students are good and which students are bad.【高分句型二】And it is the ranking that leads to the fact that the students who are good become bad students.【高分句型三】(闡述觀點(diǎn),分析原因)
In my opinion,we should get rid of ranking.As long as we master the skill or the knowledge,we are good students.【高分句型四】
點(diǎn)評(píng) 根據(jù)所提供的材料加以評(píng)論提煉要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型.
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