15．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)∧，并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線\劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2、只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計(jì)分．I want to share with you a true story，happened a couple of days ago．One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks．Unluckily，all of whom got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale．They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital．Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine．They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize the serious of the food safety problem．I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety．

分析 本文作者通過(guò)講述發(fā)生在自己身邊的真實(shí)的故事，旨在讓大家意識(shí)到食品安全問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性，從而倡議全社會(huì)都應(yīng)更加重視食品安全問(wèn)題．

解答 I want to share with you a true story，happened a couple 
of days ago．One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks 
from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to 
enjoy∧snacks．Unluckily，all of whom got poisoned and 
had stomachaches with our faces pale．They were quickly 
sent to a nearby hospital．Doctors examined them but gave 
them some medicine．They were out of danger soon before 
taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize 
the serious of the food safety problem．I strong suggest that 
the whole society pays more attention to food safety．
詳解：
1．happen改為happening    考查現(xiàn)在分詞    此處在句中作后置定語(yǔ)，由于動(dòng)詞happen與其邏輯主語(yǔ) a true story構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞happening．
2．在第二個(gè)snacks前加the     考查冠詞    此處表示特指前面提到的一位同學(xué)買回來(lái)的那袋零食，故在第二個(gè)"snacks"前加the．
3．whom改為them   考查人稱代詞    本句不是定語(yǔ)從句，不能用關(guān)系代詞whom；此處的"all of them"在句中作主語(yǔ)，指代的是他們所有的人，故用them．
4．our改為their    考查句意理解以及人稱代詞的一致性    本句的意思是：不幸的是，他們都中毒了，肚子痛的臉色蒼白；此處指的應(yīng)是他們的臉色蒼白；故用their．
5．but改為and   考查句意理解以及連詞   本句的意思是：醫(yī)生給他們做了檢查并且給他們開(kāi)了些藥，此處表示承接關(guān)系，故用and．
6．before改為after    考查從屬連詞   此處指的是吃完藥后不久他們都脫離了危險(xiǎn)，故用after．
7．去掉us之后的to     考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)     Make sb do sth 使某人做某事，故去掉us之后的to．
8．serious改為seriousness    考查名詞     此處用在動(dòng)定冠詞the之后，指的是食品安全問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性，應(yīng)使用名詞形式，故用seriousness．
9．strong改為strongly   考查副詞   此處用來(lái)修飾動(dòng)詞suggest，故用副詞strongly．
10．pays改為pay  考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣   由于動(dòng)詞 suggest之后的賓語(yǔ)從句中應(yīng)使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，即謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用（should）+do的形式；故用pay．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)是集語(yǔ)法知識(shí)與語(yǔ)言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見(jiàn)句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問(wèn)句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．

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