Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文。

For long, there was a little boy with a bad temper. His father gave him a bag of nails and told him that every time he lost his temper, he would hammer a nail in the back fence.

The first day the boy had driven 37 nails into the fence. Then it gradually dwindled(逐漸減少) down. He discovered it was easier to hold his temper than to drive those nails into the fence. Finally the day came when the boy didn't lose his temper at all.

He told his father about it and the father suggested that the boy now pull out one nail for each day when he was able to hold his temper. The days passed and the young boy was finally able to tell his father that all the nails were gone. The father took his son by the hand and led him to the fence. He said, “You have done well, my son, but look at the holes in the fence. The fence will never be the same. When you say things in anger, they leave a scar just like this one. You can put a knife in a man and draw it out. It won't matter how many times you say I'm sorry, the wound is still there. A verbal (言語的) wound is as bad as a physical one. Friends are a very rare jewel, indeed. They make you smile and encourage you to succeed. They lend an ear, they share a word of praise, and they always want to open their hearts to us. Show your friends how much you care.”

【寫作內(nèi)容】

（1）用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

（2）用約90個詞發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

①憤怒的負面影響；

②通過你或你身邊的例子說明憤怒的負面影響；

③在你憤怒的時候你將怎么控制自己的情緒。

【寫作要求】

（1）寫作時，可以參考閱讀材料，但不得直接引用原文；

（2）作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

（3）不必寫標題

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Answer 1

【答案】

The passage tells us that a hot-tempered boy was asked by his father to hammer a nail in the fence when he released his anger and after the boy pulled out the nails, his father helped him realize the harm of anger.

Obviously, anger is a passive emotion, which harms one’s physical and mental health. What’s worse, it can lead to problems at work in your personal relationships.

I can remember what happened between me and my best friend, Jack in junior school. One day when I entered the classroom, I heard my classmates talking about my secret, which I shared with Jack the day before! What I could think of was that Jack broke his word and let out my secret! I shouted at him angrily, ignoring his explanation. Soon I learned another classmate overheard our conversation and told it to others.

It was then that I really realized what destructive effect anger had, so I decided to control my negative emotion. Whenever I feel angry, I will try to calm down and think twice before taking action, which has improved my life a lot.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語What’s worse而且；lead to導(dǎo)致；share sth with sb 與。。分享；shouted at朝。。大喊；calm down平靜下來；Obviously, anger is a passive emotion, which harms one’s physical and mental health這個句子which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；It was then that I really realized what destructive effect anger had這個句子運用到強調(diào)句；Whenever I feel angry, I will try to calm down and think twice before taking action, which has improved my life a lot這個句子運用到whenever引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句；