Question

【題目】某英語(yǔ)雜志正在舉辦“分享我的格言”的活動(dòng)，你最喜歡的英語(yǔ)格言是Robert Collier的“Success is the sum of small efforts, repealed day in and day out”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的寫作提示寫一篇投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你如何理解這句格言；

2 .舉例說(shuō)明你的觀點(diǎn)。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

Dear Editor,

I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. I feel it a great honor to get involved in such a meaningful activity.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

Tm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. I feel it a great honor to get involved in such a meaningful activity. My favorite saying is “Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out” by Robert Collier. It tells us that success is the result of continuous hard work.

As far as I am concerned, no one can achieve success easily. Many people succeeded because they made extraordinary efforts. It was their persistence that finally led to success. Take the Curies for example. When they were researching into radioactivity, they did experiment after experiment. They worked hard all day long with less modem equipment. They didn't give up easily in the face of failure. Instead they kept on trying. Finally, they discovered radium after years of hard work.

So if we want to succeed, we must make persistent efforts. I am sure our hard work will pay off.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】 這是一篇以書信格式寫的投稿作文，題目要求是對(duì)自己喜歡的格言介紹并且舉例說(shuō)明，作者喜歡的格言是Success is the sum of small efforts, repealed day in and day out，意思是成功是每天的進(jìn)步總和。此篇作文主要提綱就是理解格言，并舉例說(shuō)明。作者對(duì)格言的理解是It tells us that success is the result of continuous hard work.積少成多，方能成功。同時(shí)作者列舉了 Curies 即居里夫人的事例。文章中多次使用高級(jí)詞匯，復(fù)雜句式 ，例如feel it a great honor to 意思是對(duì).....感到榮幸，As far as I am concerned意思是就我而言，give up意思是放棄等等，同時(shí)文章段落清晰，是片不錯(cuò)的文章。