【題目】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。

短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Abbly,

How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty students take exams for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that I will feel lonely. They can’t imagine a girl so young living alone. They advise me to studying in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with him. How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up?

Best wishes,

Jane

【答案】

【1】a去掉

【2】加入been

【3】take改為took

【4】was改為were

【5】Therefore改為However

【6】strong改為strongly

【7】too改為so

【8】studying改為study

【9】him改為them

【10】what改為that

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】a去掉 本句中的名詞news是一個不可數(shù)名詞，不能用a修飾。

【2】加入been 本句是被動語態(tài)，澳大利亞的一所大學(xué)向我提供一份獎學(xué)金。對于我來說，是被提供獎學(xué)金。

【3】take改為took 句意：120名學(xué)生參加了開始，只有一小部分人被選中，我是其中之一。學(xué)生們參加獎學(xué)金考試是過去發(fā)生的事情，所以使用一般過去時的時態(tài)。

【4】was改為were 本句的主語是a few，謂語動詞應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式were。

【5】Therefore改為However 我獲得了獎學(xué)金，但是我的父母親很不高興。上下文之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以使用however。

【6】strong改為strongly 本句使用副詞strongly在句中做狀語修飾謂語部分。句意：他們強(qiáng)烈反對我們。

【7】too改為so 本句是固定句式so…that…如此…以至于…；他們說那個學(xué)校太遠(yuǎn)了以至于他們一整年看不到我，并且他們擔(dān)心我會感覺孤單。

【8】studying改為study 固定結(jié)構(gòu)advise sb to do sth建議某人做某事；他們建議我在首都學(xué)習(xí)。

【9】him改為them 本句中使用them代替parents。Him只能指代單數(shù)。

【10】what改為that 本句是一個同位語從句，對前面的名稱the fact的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋說明，that在句中不充當(dāng)任何成分，只起引導(dǎo)連接的作用。

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