Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華，你校即將舉行一年一度的“校園書市 (a campus book fair)”活動，其目的是給同學(xué)們提供一個交換、利用圖書的機會。請你用英語寫信給你的加拿大筆友Mike, 介紹此次活動的有關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

1. 活動目的；

2. 活動內(nèi)容：買書，賣書，交換圖書;

3. 活動意義。

Dear Mike,

How are you doing these days?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

How are you doing these days?

Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books, the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school. The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school, who are to sell, purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers.

As a regular visitor, I’ve found myself increasingly attracted by the fair. For one thing, the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics, motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons. For another, most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer.

Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華，你校即將舉行一年一度的“校園書市 (a campus book fair)”活動，其目的是給同學(xué)們提供一個交換、利用圖書的機會。請你用英語寫信給你的加拿大筆友Mike, 介紹此次活動的有關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1. 活動目的；2. 活動內(nèi)容：買書，賣書，交換圖書;3. 活動意義。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】

本文段落清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，高級句式多。Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books, the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school.過去分詞作狀語，同時運用了定語從句；The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school, who are to sell, purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers.非限制性定語從句用在句中；As a regular visitor, I’ve found myself increasingly attracted by the fair. For one thing, the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics, motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons.現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語從句；For another, most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer.比較級和賓語從句結(jié)合在句中；Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better.祈使句和條件狀語從句經(jīng)典搭配。