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近期, 你所在城市的中學(xué)生就“最美漢字”進(jìn)行投票。請閱讀下面一則新聞報(bào)道, 用英文寫一篇短文, 向?qū)W校英文報(bào)“Happy Teens”專欄投稿。

High school students recommend ren as message to the world
The Chinese character ren, a word that generally means “benevolence”, has been selected by high school students in a poll(民意調(diào)查)to highlight Chinese culture around the world. The character ren was selected by 8.33 percent of the 3. 000 respondents who took part in the poll, according to one of the organizers, a student from a high school.
It was followed by the characters ai, yi, meng and xiao, which mean ‘‘love”, “one”, “dream’’ and “filial piety”. Those characters ranked in the “top-20 most beautiful Chinese characters”.
China Dally, March 6, 2013. Page 4
你的短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1. 簡要概括學(xué)生推薦這五個(gè)漢字的理由。
2. 簡述你最想推薦的一至兩個(gè)漢字及其寓意。
3. 談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?br />注意：
1. 對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述, 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不要簡單翻譯。
2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
Recently, some high school students conducted a poll asking people to choose some Chinese characters that Can best reflect Chinese culture.
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Answer 1

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Recently, some high school students conducted a poll asking people to choose some Chinese characters that can best reflect Chinese culture.
Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics, which are principles and necessities for a qualified human being.
Of all characters. 1 will also put ren on the top of my list、which is followed by meng. Being ren, that is, being kind, caring and helpful, calls on one to he friendly and considerate to others Holding meng, which means best wishes for the future, one is not only to seek for opportunities for a better life, but also to create brand-new things for people around the world, feeling happy and optimistic.
Personally, Chinese characters are so charming that they are treasures of human cultures With deep love for Chinese culture, we should strive to promote them to tile world.

試題分析：本文是圖畫作文，一般分為三段，第一段描述圖畫內(nèi)容，第二段與圖畫相關(guān)的一些現(xiàn)象，第三段發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)；要注意文章的分段，使得結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂脧?fù)合句，比如，狀語從句，定語從句和名詞性從句。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。
點(diǎn)評：加強(qiáng)積累適量的詞匯、詞組和增加各種類型句子的運(yùn)用。把握好各種句型和詞匯的搭配，并從各類題材和體裁著手，思考內(nèi)容的連貫性，語言和句子的準(zhǔn)確性。會使用連接詞或過渡句使句子的連接起來，讀起來流暢。