Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是李華，你班來(lái)自美國(guó)的交流學(xué)生Arthur患病住院已有三周，請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)封信，主要內(nèi)容包括：

－詢問(wèn)病情，表示關(guān)切

－介紹班級(jí)近期活動(dòng)、學(xué)習(xí)等情況

－表達(dá)祝愿

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．信的格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　Dear Arthur,

________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　一、評(píng)分原則

　　1．本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。

　　2．評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

　　3．詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。

　　4．評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。

　　5．拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。

　　6．如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差以至影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

　　二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

　　1．詢問(wèn)病情，表示關(guān)切

　　2．介紹班級(jí)近期活動(dòng)、學(xué)習(xí)等情況

　　3．表達(dá)祝愿

　　三、各檔次的給分范圍和要求

　　四、說(shuō)明：1．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。2．應(yīng)緊扣主題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

　　Possible Version 1

Dear Arthur,

　　It's three weeks since you fell ill．I guess you have suffered a lot in the hospital, but are you feeling any better now?We're concerned about your health．And we all miss you very much．

　　In the past three weeks, we've been buried in study because the exam is around the corner．But don't worry about your lessons, with which all of us will help you when you are back．Besides the routine work, we held a football match in our grade and our class won the championship．If only you had been with us!

　　We hope you will soon recover and join us in our colorful school life．

　　Best wishes．

Yours,

Li Hua

　　Possible Version 2

Dear Arthur,

　　It has been three weeks since you went to hospital．How are you feeling now?Hope you will recover soon because all of our classmates miss you very much．

　　As you may know, we have just finished our mid-term exam．I am very happy to say that I made great progress this time．I really appreciate your encouragement．Besides, our school's sports meeting will be held next Friday and Saturday．Our class did really well last year and I believe we would get more prizes this year if you were to join us．

　　We are looking forward to your coming back．

　　Take care of yourself!

Yours,

Li Hua