Question

9．上個(gè)月，兩名來(lái)自美國(guó)的交流生（exchange student）在你家住了兩周．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給的提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
1．相處融洽；
2．提高了自己的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)；
3．相互了解了對(duì)方的文化；
4．父母為他們做了傳統(tǒng)的中國(guó)美食．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 兩名來(lái)自美國(guó)的交流生（exchange student）在你家住了兩周．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．相處融洽、提高了自己的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)、相互了解了對(duì)方的文化、父母為他們做了傳統(tǒng)的中國(guó)美食．注意使用一些過(guò)渡句或過(guò)渡詞來(lái)使句子讀起來(lái)流暢．但是要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，為了避免太多單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫(xiě)一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】行文流暢，簡(jiǎn)潔明了，高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和結(jié)構(gòu)為文章增色不少．高級(jí)短語(yǔ)：had a deeper and better understanding of the differences 對(duì)差異有了更好更深入的理解．warm-hearted parents，熱心的父母．made a lot of delicious traditional Chinese food做了許多美味的中國(guó)菜．句式：lso took them to the snack street，where they tasted many traditional Chinese snacks．使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，

解答 Last month two American exchange students stayed in my home for two weeks．We got along well with each other and learned a lot from each other．They helped me much with my oral English because communicating with the native English speakers is a good way to improve my oral English．（高級(jí)句型）During their stay，we chatted a lot about both Chinese and American cultures and customs．Therefore，we had a deeper and better understanding of the differences between the two cultures．（高級(jí)句型）Besides，my warm-hearted parents made a lot of delicious traditional Chinese food for them．I also took them to the snack street，where they tasted many traditional Chinese snacks．（高級(jí)句型）
      In a word，we had a great time last month．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類寫(xiě)作的文章較開(kāi)放式的文體，比較好寫(xiě)．學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，首先思路要清晰，要對(duì)所表達(dá)的句子通順的說(shuō)出來(lái)，遇到不會(huì)的要學(xué)會(huì)替換所用語(yǔ)，來(lái)達(dá)到同樣的意思．在每一篇作文中，對(duì)于表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用俗語(yǔ)，運(yùn)用平時(shí)常用的句式來(lái)使文章富有變化，表達(dá)地道得體．