Question

14．假如你是李華，一名高中生．請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，呼吁同學們調(diào)節(jié)好自己的學習和生活．發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點如下：
1．許多同學為了學習，晚上經(jīng)常熬夜，白天課堂上容易犯困
2．有的同學沒有養(yǎng)成良好的飲食習慣
3．針對以上現(xiàn)狀，提出建議
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫
Dear everyone，
I'm greatly honoured to make a short speech today．                                 
That's all．Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，根據(jù)題目要求可知以第一人稱的口吻來進行敘述，主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容分成兩部分：一 敘述學生的問題；二 提出改正的建議．
高分句型：
1．And some classmates even develop a bad eating habit，which （引導定語從句，which代指主句）will surely do harm to their health
一些同學形成了不好的飲食習慣，這肯定會對他們的健康有害．
2．Only in this way can we keep fit and study well（only引導狀語位于句首，主句用倒裝）
只有用這種方法，我們才能保持健康，好好學習．

解答 Dear everyone，
     I'm greatly honoured to make a short speech today．Recently I have found that many classmates study late into the night．As a result，they often cannot help falling asleep in class during the day．And some classmates even develop a bad eating habit，which will surely do harm to their health（高分句型一）（學生的問題）．
      As is known to all，it's extremely important for us students to have enough sleep and a proper diet．We must make wise use of our time，and develop a good eating habit．Only in this way can we keep fit and study well（高分句型二）．I hope you will agree with me（改正的建議）．
      That's all．Thank you for listening!

點評 倒裝句式是高中生應該掌握的一種句式，也是作文的亮點，除了only的倒裝，否定詞位于句首時，也需要用倒裝，例如：
Never have I been there before．