Question

19．假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友李佳最近用英語給你寫信詢問如何度過一個(gè)有意義的暑假．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的文字提示用英語給他寫一封回信．
1．科學(xué)安排，復(fù)習(xí)功課；
2．積極參加體育鍛煉與社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)；
3．與家人一塊去旅游．　　　
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右 （開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
　　　2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)　social activity
Dear Li Jia，
                                                                 
                                            Yours，
                                                          Li  Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的朋友李佳最近用英語給你寫信詢問如何度過一個(gè)有意義的暑假．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的文字提示用英語給他寫一封回信．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：科學(xué)安排，復(fù)習(xí)功課；積極參加體育鍛煉與社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)；與家人一塊去旅游    2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：more than非常，比…多；go over 復(fù)習(xí)；What's more而且；not only，but also不僅，而且；take an active part in積極參加； be of great use非常有用；
 I'm more than happy to hear from you and now I'd like to share my suggestions on how to spend the summer holiday．（高分句型一）
What's more，not only can you take exercise as usual but also take an active part in some social activities．（高分句型二）
Also，if possible，traveling with your family is one of the best ways to spend a holiday，which can relax your body as well as broaden your eyes．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Li Jia，
      I'm more than happy to hear from you and now I'd like to share my suggestions on how to spend the summer holiday．（高分句型一）
      First，being a student，you should put your study in the first place．So it's a good idea to spend much time going over or even learning some new lessons by yourself．What's more，not only can you take exercise as usual but also take an active part in some social activities．（高分句型二）I think it will be of great use to your physical and mental health and help you learn more about society．Also，if possible，traveling with your family is one of the best ways to spend a holiday，which can relax your body as well as broaden your eyes．（高分句型三）
      Hope you will have a meaningful holiday．
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　                                                                                          Li  Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧