Question

19．假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處；每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符合（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃?rùn)M線，并在該橫線下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；    
         2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Last week，I，together with my friends，visited Mount Yuntai in Henan Province．It is famous as its beautiful and unique scenery．We gathered at the school gate at 7：00 am．Two hours late we arrived by bus．On arriving，we set about climb in groups．At noon，we got together at the Geological Museum to watch some exhibits，where show how geological structures form．Then we had lunch and take a break．At 2：00 pm，we continued my exploration regardless of tiredness．We met at that is called Zhuyu Peak at 4：00 pm．After taking some photos，we walked down the mountain．At 6：00 pm，we returned back to school．It was unforgettable trip．I felt excited by the amazed beauty of nature．

Answer 1

分析 文章講述了上周我和朋友們?nèi)ピ婆_(tái)山旅行的經(jīng)歷．那兒的風(fēng)景真美．我們一大早就出發(fā)了，到達(dá)后開(kāi)始爬山，然后參觀了地質(zhì)博物館．這是一次難忘的旅行．

解答 Last week，I，together with my friends，visited Mount Yuntai in Henan Province．It is famous asits beautiful and unique scenery．We gathered at the school gate at 7：00 am．Two hours late we arrived by bus．On arriving，we set about climb in groups．At noon，we got together at the Geological Museum to watch some exhibits，where show how geological structures form．Then we had lunch and take a break．At 2：00 pm，we continued my exploration regardless of tiredness．We met at that is called Zhuyu Peak at 4：00 pm．After taking some photos，we walked down the mountain．At 6：00 pm，we returned back to school．It was∧unforgettable trip．I felt excited by the amazed beauty of nature．
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)s改為for；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．be famous for因?yàn)椤�而出名�?br />2．late改為later；副詞錯(cuò)誤．later與時(shí)間連用，表示多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間后．
3．climb改為climbing；動(dòng)名詞錯(cuò)誤．set about doing sth著手做某事．
4．where改為which；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中show how geological structures form修飾exhibits，是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；從句缺少主語(yǔ)且先行詞exhibits指物，要用which來(lái)引導(dǎo)．
5．take改為took；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．文章講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
6．my改為our；邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是we．
7．that改為what；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中is called Zhuyu Peak作介詞at的賓語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；從句缺少主語(yǔ)且句意指代的是物，要用what來(lái)連接．
8．back去掉；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．return to回到，不能和back重復(fù)使用．
9．加an；冠詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是泛指一次難忘的旅行，要用不定冠詞來(lái)限定．
10．a(chǎn)mazed改為amazing；形容詞錯(cuò)誤．句中amaze修飾名詞beauty，表示事物的特征和屬性，要用現(xiàn)在分詞構(gòu)成的形容詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．