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9．假設(shè)你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在舉辦看圖征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察以下三幅圖，并想象第四幅圖的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫出一個(gè)涵蓋連環(huán)圖的內(nèi)容并有完整結(jié)局的故事．

注意：1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
4．故事的主人公名叫李津，不要在文中透露你本人所在學(xué)校和地區(qū)的信息．
參考詞匯：拐杖crutch
LiJin is a high school student，and a classmate of mine．He goes to school by bus…
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Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序及所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英文寫一篇短文，在寫作時(shí)，以第三人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料．
重要短語(yǔ)：go to play basketball （去打籃球）； rush hour （交通擁擠時(shí)間，上下班高峰時(shí)間）；selfish（自私的）；priority seats（優(yōu)先座位）；give up（放棄）
                pretend to do（假裝做某事）；think twice（再三考慮）； however（然而）；hurt his ankle（傷了他的腳踝）；walk with a crutch（用拐杖走路）；
                reflect on （反省，回顧）．
高分句型：1．Jim is rather selfish，so he didn't think twice about taking one of the priority seats．
                 在這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞形式作介詞about的賓語(yǔ)．
                2．Even when an elderly passenger is standing nearby，he doesn't give up the seat and pretends not to notice them．
                 even在這個(gè)句子中引導(dǎo)一個(gè)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．
                3．Last weekend，Li Jin hurt his ankle while playing basketball
                 句中的while playing…是一種省略"主語(yǔ)+be動(dòng)詞"的做法，相當(dāng)于從句"while he is playing basketball"．
                 4．In fact，he has determined that he will never again fail to give the priority seat to anyone who is more in need of it．
                  這是一個(gè)雙重復(fù)合句，that引導(dǎo)一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句中又含有一個(gè)who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Li Jin is a high school student，and a classmate of mine．He goes to school by bus every morning．During the rush hour，the bus is often crowded．Li Jin is rather selfish，so he doesn't think twice about taking one of the priority seats（高分句型一）．Even when an elderly passenger is standing nearby，he doesn't give up the seat and pretends not to notice them（高分句型二）．（圖1）
Last weekend，Li Jin hurt his ankle while playing basketball（高分句型三）（圖2）．Now，he has to walk with a crutch，and standing for long periods is painful．This morning，he was sad to find that he had to stand on the bus．A young woman in one of the priority seats ignored him completely，and remained absorbed in a book she was reading（圖3）．Fortunately，this experience has made Li Jin reflect on his own attitude to vulnerable people．In fact，he has determined that he will never again fail to give the priority seat to anyone who is more in need of it（高分句型四）．（　圖4．發(fā)揮想象　）

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