Question

【題目】為了減少環(huán)境污染、緩解城市交通壓力，2018年1月1日我市開始實施新的機動車限號行駛規(guī)定（the license number-plate restrictions)。假定你最近就我市實施這一新規(guī)定進行了采訪，請用英語寫一篇短文,向某英語報投稿。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 限號帶來的好處；

2. 限號存在的問題；

3. 你的看法及改進建議。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I made a survey on the new license number-plate restrictions which have been adopted in our city since January 1, 2018.

Many people agree that the system to some extent, has reduced the environment pollution and relieved the pressure of transportation. However, every coin has two sides. Many car owners complain that it is annoying that they are not allowed to drive their own cars, especially when something is urgent.

In my opinion, for the benefit of the public, it is worthwhile to sacrifice part of personal convenience. However, I think it will be better if that government provide more means of public transportation for citizens and reduce the fans.

【解析】這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫作。本題給了一個話題，以提綱的形式提出了論點（限號帶來的好處及存在的問題）及需要考生自由發(fā)揮的部分（你的看法及改進意見）。對于限號的好處及存在的問題，沒有具體給出。自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種，并就此發(fā)表個人的見解。此題給了學生一定的想象空間，有利于學生的發(fā)揮。本文可用三段成文形式成文。

亮點分析：本文句式靈活多變，復雜句運用恰到好處，在復雜句中含有定語從句，名詞從句及狀語從句。語言比較嚴謹，運用了較高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。同時文中還運用了許多較高級的詞匯，如to some extent, every coin has two sides, In my opinion，for the benefit of the public，it is worthwhile to do, sacrifice part of personal convenience. Provide…for…等。文章結(jié)構(gòu)如下：

第一段提出話題。在本段中運用一個由which引導的定語從句… which have been adopted in our city since January 1, 2018.

第二段主要敘述限號的好處及存在的問題。運用一個賓語從句來表達出限號的好處。（Many people agree that the system to some extent, has reduced the environment pollution and relieved the pressure of transportation. ）接著用轉(zhuǎn)折連詞However，引出限號存在的問題時運用一句諺語“ every coin has two sides.”來說明任何事情都有利有弊，再用一個復雜句（Many car owners complain that it is annoying that they are not allowed to drive their own cars, especially when something is urgent.）說明其存在的問題。

最后一段提出自己的看法及改進意見。在本段中運用一個常用句式“it is worthwhile to do something”及復雜句（I think it will be better if that government provide more mans of public transportation for citizens and reduce the fans.）。這個復雜句是一個賓語從句中含有一個由if引導的狀語從句。