Question

【題目】 短文改錯(cuò)

My summer vacation was divided in four parts. First , I went traveling with my cousin which is the same age as me. We went to many places of interests in China and enjoyed myself very much. And we planned to travel abroad next summer. Then I learned to play guitar. I went to my guitar class three times a week and practice a lot during the vacation. I still played music in my spare time and felt quite relaxing. Then I spent a lot of time read classic works by famous writers. What’s more, since my mom was busy, I helped do many housework. I expect the next summer will come over soon!

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in改為into

【2】which改為who

【3】interests改為interest

【4】myself改為ourselves

【5】play之后加the

【6】practice改為practiced

【7】relaxing改為relaxed

【8】read改為reading

【9】many改為much

【10】刪掉over

【解析】

【1】in改為into；考查固定短語(yǔ)，be divided into..被劃分為..因此用into。

【2】which改為who；原文中提到I went traveling with my cousin who is the same age as me.我和與我同齡的堂兄一起旅游了。可知who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句主語(yǔ)是人，而which是指物。

【3】interests改為interest;考查固定短語(yǔ)，名勝古跡，應(yīng)該表達(dá)為places of interest。所以去掉s。

【4】myself改為ourselves；根據(jù)原句We went to many places of interests in China and enjoyed myself very much.（我們參觀了中國(guó)的許多名勝古跡，并且玩的很愉快）可知整個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)是we，and連接一個(gè)并列句，所以后面的句子主語(yǔ)也是we，應(yīng)用ourselves。

【5】play之后加the；考查固定搭配。play后加樂器要加定冠詞the，如play the piano, play the violind，play the guitar等，因此應(yīng)該加the.

【6】practice改為practiced；考查句子時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)原句I went to my guitar class three times a week and practice a lot during the vacation.可知前一部分是一般過去時(shí)，and連接并列句，后面也同樣用一般過去時(shí)。

【7】relaxing改為relaxed；relaxing修飾物，而relaxed修飾人，原文是講我感到很放松，所以應(yīng)用relaxed。

【8】read改為reading；考查固定短語(yǔ)，spend time on sth或spend time (in) doing sth.（花費(fèi)時(shí)間在某事上或花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事），所以應(yīng)該用reading。

【9】many改為much；many+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，much+不可數(shù)名詞，housework是不可數(shù)名詞，與much搭配。

【10】刪掉over；根據(jù)句意：我希望下個(gè)暑假盡快到來(lái)！come over是順便來(lái)訪、過來(lái)的意思，與原文不符。所以應(yīng)用come，直接表示到來(lái)。