Question

14．國(guó)際旅游成為當(dāng)今世界飛速發(fā)展的一個(gè)產(chǎn)業(yè)，然而不幸的是，國(guó)際旅游制造的不同文化間的緊張比相互理解要多，請(qǐng)你就這一現(xiàn)象分析原因，并提出自己的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．參考詞匯：緊張 tension．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
However，many people maintain that traveling to other parts of the world creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures．
然而，許多人認(rèn)為到世界的其他地方旅行創(chuàng)造緊張氛圍而不是來(lái)自不同文化背景的人們之間的理解力．
高分句型二：
Besides，the increase of international tourists will directly lead to the rise of prices，the problem of traffic congestion，and the worsening of environment．
此外，國(guó)際游客的增加將直接導(dǎo)致房?jī)r(jià)的上漲，交通擁堵問題，和環(huán)境的惡化．

解答 Traveling around the world is not only an effective way for people to ease tension in daily life and work，but also is a direct way to explore the wonder of the world and other cultures．Nowadays international tourism has become a rapidly developing industry．However，many people maintain that traveling to other parts of the world creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures（高分句型一）．I think there are some valid points in this argument．
The difference in language，culture，customs，and lifestyle often results in conflicts between tourists and local residents．People from various cultures often have different attitudes towards the same thing or behavior，thus causing further misunderstanding．Besides，the increase of international tourists will directly lead to the rise of prices，the problem of traffic congestion，and the worsening of environment（高分句型二）．So it is not strange for international tourists to sense the obvious hostility from local inhabitants．
Wonderful as it seems to be，the negative aspects of the international tourism cannot be overlooked．Anyone going to another country should be taught to observe local customs and understand the conventional wisdoms of that country．Otherwise a well-intentioned vacation may turn out to be a nightmare．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．