Question

【題目】現在城市交通擁堵嚴重，請寫一篇文章列出原因及對策。要點如下：

1．原因（私家車過多，公共交通設施不完善……）；

2．對策(重視科學的道路設計，加強公共交通，……)；

注意：1．詞數100左右；

2．參考詞匯：公共交通 public transportation

（不）科學的道路設計 （unscientific）scientific road design

Answer 1

【答案】

Almost every city has some big traffic problems and no single reason can contribute to it. Besides a large population, we also have increasing private cars and unscientific road design, all of which can lead to traffic accidents and traffic jam .

Although more roads have been built and some roads are broadened, without reasonable road design the traffic jam and accidents are not likely to be avoided. Besides, if some broken roads are not repaired in time, they will slow the flow of the traffic, especially at rush hours. What’s more, it is advisable to promote the advanced public transportation. We should open up more bus routes and to equip the bus with advanced transportation monitoring system. If a person can take a bus conveniently and safely anywhere and anytime with less expense, who likes to drive the costly cars?

【解析】

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