11．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 （﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
One day，on her way to school，Li Lan found the small bag near the bus station．He opened it and found a lot of money as soon as a calling card inside．From the calling card，she discover the owner's address and his telephone number．She thought the owner must very worried．So she went to the public telephones and called the owner．Then she waited at the bus station．The owner came by taxi very soon，but Li Lan gave the bag to him．The owner is so grateful to her that he took out from 100yuan to reward Li Lan，but Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school．

分析 有一天李蘭上學(xué)的路上看到車站旁邊有個包，里面有很多錢和一張名片．從名片上，她找到了電話號碼，打電話給失主．丟包的人很感謝，掏出了一百塊錢，但李蘭禮貌地拒絕了．

解答 One day，on her way to school，Li Lan found the small bag near the bus station．He opened it and found a lot of money as soon as a calling card inside．From the calling card，she discover the owner's address and his telephone number．She thought the owner must∧very worried．So she went to the public telephones and called the owner．Then she waited at the bus station．The owner came by taxi very soon，but Li Lan gave the bag to him．The owner is so grateful to her that he took out from 100yuan to reward Li Lan，but Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school．
詳解：
1．the改為a；冠詞錯誤．句意表達(dá)的是泛指，要用不定冠詞．
2．He改為She；邏輯指代錯誤．句意指代的是女性．
3．soon改為well；短語搭配錯誤．a(chǎn)s well as和．
4．discover改為discovered；時(shí)態(tài)錯誤．文章講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
5．加be；句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤．句中must后要接動詞原形，be worried擔(dān)心．
6．telephones改為telephone；名詞錯誤．句意表達(dá)的是單數(shù)．
7．but改為and/so；連詞錯誤．句意表達(dá)的是承接，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
8．is改為was；時(shí)態(tài)錯誤．文章講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
9．from去掉；動詞搭配錯誤．take out拿出，后接賓語，不需要再加介詞．
10．polite改為politely；副詞錯誤．句中polite修飾動詞refused，要用副詞．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．�？嫉闹R點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．

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