Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（25分）
假定最近你們班進(jìn)行了一次題為“保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)是否很重要”的討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)向大家介紹一下討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ā?br />

觀點(diǎn)	87%認(rèn)為重要	13%認(rèn)為不重要
理由	1．文化遺產(chǎn)是古代偉大文明的象征； 2．文化遺產(chǎn)大多和偉人聯(lián)系在一起， 保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)也是尊重偉人 3．保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)可以增強(qiáng)我們的民族自豪感	1．對(duì)社會(huì)發(fā)展無(wú)太大的促進(jìn)作用； 2．浪費(fèi)金錢(qián)和時(shí)間

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右。
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：促進(jìn)  promote 文化遺產(chǎn)  cultural relics
古代偉大文明的象征a symbol of great ancient civilization
Recently our class had a heated discussion about                           
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether it is important to protect cultural heritage.
87% of the students consider it important to protect cultural heritage. They think that cultural heritage is a symbol of great ancient civilization. Most cultural heritage is related to great people, so protecting it shows respect for them. Cultural heritage is of great value and protecting it can make us feel proud of our nation.
However, the rest hold the opinion that it doesn’t matter whether cultural heritage is protected. They think it won’t promote the development of society, so it is a waste of time and money to protect it.
As far as I’m concerned, our country’s cultural heritage protection has made great progress, but many problems still exist and need to be solved. Therefore, we should keep our mind clear and take more effective steps to better protect cultural heritage.

解析試題分析：對(duì)于本文的寫(xiě)作，學(xué)生從三方面進(jìn)行闡述。首先對(duì)87%贊臣的同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行表達(dá)，按照題目所給的三條理由，分條進(jìn)行闡述，在寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中注意使用起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞，并注意注意用詞的多樣；然后對(duì)剩下的反對(duì)的同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，從兩點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分析，此部分可以稍微略寫(xiě)，這樣顯得文章活潑，詳略得當(dāng)；最后，對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡明，這是我們經(jīng)常寫(xiě)的樣式，可以表達(dá)出對(duì)保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)保護(hù)的贊同，同時(shí)也需要更好的、更有效的措施來(lái)進(jìn)行。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：議論文是比較容易寫(xiě)的文體，平時(shí)學(xué)生的練習(xí)也比較多，議論文的寫(xiě)作一般采用經(jīng)典的二段或三段式進(jìn)行行文。寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中注意避免使用中式英文，對(duì)于表達(dá)內(nèi)容層次時(shí)需要使用平時(shí)積累的層次關(guān)系的短語(yǔ)，多使用被動(dòng)，倒裝、虛擬來(lái)提升作文的美度。在平時(shí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫(xiě)的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。