Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每次錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my mother over if I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3, heavily burden with their studies, are so busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seemed to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for her eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can’t accept her ideas. I think it is relaxed to watch TV before a day’s hard work. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. In addition, and we can be kept well informed of what’s happening at home and abroad and keep up with the times.

Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the content is limited to news and program of entertainment, sports or science.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】if→whether

【2】burden→burdened

【3】so→too

【4】seemed→seems

【5】will not able→will not be able

【6】her→my

【7】relaxed→relaxing

【8】before→after

【9】and刪掉

【10】program→programs

【解析】

【1】這里over后面是賓語從句，介詞后用whether表是否。所以if→whether。

【2】這里heavily 應(yīng)該修飾形容詞burdened，burdened with以……為負(fù)擔(dān)，所以burden→burdened。

【3】從句意看，這里是too+形容詞+ to+動(dòng)詞，而so…that…是固定搭配。所以so→too。

【4】全文是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，這里應(yīng)該保持一致，所以seemed→seems。

【5】will not be able be able to 放在will之后，是謂語，所以加be動(dòng)詞。

【6】句意：看電視太多對(duì)我的眼睛不好。所以her→my。

【7】it是主語，relaxing的意思是令人放松的，relaxed松懈的。所以relaxed→relaxing。

【8】句意：在一天的辛苦的工作之后，我認(rèn)為看電視令人放松。所以before→after。

【9】從句子結(jié)構(gòu)看，and沒用，實(shí)際上，in additional和and 意思相同。所以去掉and。

【10】program是可數(shù)名詞，這里指娛樂、運(yùn)動(dòng)或者科普三個(gè)方面的節(jié)目，所以用復(fù)數(shù)形式programs。