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【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student held at the end of September. Unluckily, I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, all of which used to be my strong subject. As a result of, my total test score fell greatly and ranked 400th in our grade. I feel upset and my mother suggested I spend some time in my hobby—fishing for relaxation. Driving by my mother’s suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend. There I fished for a whole day but calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successful pushed me out off low spirits.

Answer 1

【答案】The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student∧ held at the end of September. Unluckily, I

that was

performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, all of which used to be my strong subject. As a result of, my total

both subjects \

test score fell greatly and ranked 400th in our grade. I feel upset and my mother suggested I spend some time in my

felt on

hobby-fishing for relaxation. Driving by my mother’s suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend. There I fished for a

Driven

whole day but calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successful pushed me out off low spirits.

and successfully

【解析】1.which 改為that。

考查定語(yǔ)從句。The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student∧ held at the end of September。本句中The first monthly exam 是先行詞，在定語(yǔ)從句中作I took 的賓語(yǔ)，但先行詞被序數(shù)詞the first修飾。根據(jù)定語(yǔ)從句中如果先行詞被序數(shù)詞修飾，關(guān)系代詞只能用that，不能用which。故which改為that。

2 在held前面加上was。

考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。我作為一個(gè)高中生的第一次月考，在九月底舉行。主語(yǔ)是the first monthly exam，與舉行hold 是被動(dòng)關(guān)系。故要用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。因?yàn)檫@是主句的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，不是非謂語(yǔ)，故要加上was，構(gòu)成 was held 。

3.all改為both。

考查代詞。不幸的是我的數(shù)學(xué)和化學(xué)成績(jī)不好，這兩項(xiàng)以前都是我的強(qiáng)項(xiàng)。先行詞是數(shù)學(xué)和化學(xué)，在從句中作of 的賓語(yǔ)。兩者要用both，三者或三者以上的“都”要用all。故要把all改為both。

4.subject 改為subjects。

考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。兩門(mén)功課是復(fù)數(shù)，故要用復(fù)數(shù)，即加S。。

5.去掉of。

考察固定搭配。因此，我考試成績(jī)的總分大大下降，在我們的年級(jí)中排名第四百。as a result,因此，結(jié)果是；as a result of …由于，作為……結(jié)果，因?yàn)椤６��?/span>Of 后面必須有賓語(yǔ)。故去掉of。

6.feel改為felt。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。我（那時(shí)）感到非常傷心。整篇文章講的是過(guò)去的事，用的是一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故把feel 改為felt。

7.in 改為on。

考查固定搭配。spend some time/money in doing sth.或spend some time/money on sth.故要把in改為on. Spend some time on my hobby-fishing for relaxation。

8.Driving 改為Driven。

考查非謂語(yǔ)。Driving by my mother’s suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend.此句中。Drive 的邏輯主語(yǔ)是I，這兩者之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故要用過(guò)去分詞作狀語(yǔ)。在我母親的建議（驅(qū)使）下。我周末去了一個(gè)池塘。我是被驅(qū)使，故把driving 改為driven。

9.but改為and。

考查連詞。我在那里釣了一整天，而且我也平靜下來(lái)。句子前后不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是并列關(guān)系。故but 改為and。

10.successful 改為successfully。

考查副詞。成功捕魚(yú)的喜悅使我走出心情低落。Successfully用于修飾動(dòng)詞，不能用形容詞。