Question

【題目】假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你的同學(xué)Van打算暑假回國(guó)，正考慮為他媽媽帶些中國(guó)特色的禮物，特發(fā)信息向你征求建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)給Van回復(fù)郵件。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):

1. 建議禮物:旗袍，中國(guó)結(jié)等

2. 說(shuō)明選擇禮物的原因

3. 表達(dá)祝福和問(wèn)候

注意:1、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

2、詞數(shù)100左右。

參考詞匯:旗袍 Chi-pao 中國(guó)結(jié) Chinese knot

Dear Van,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Van,

I’m delighted to know that you are going back to your homeland during this summer holidays and that you want to bring some gifts for your mother, which symbolize Chinese culture.

From my point of view, you can buy the following present. First, I think Chi-pao, a beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. And I’m sure your mother will like it very much. In addition, the Chinese knot is also a nice souvenir, which is usually hung in the sitting room as a beautiful decoration. It is a symbol of good luck. I do hope it will bring your family good luck and happiness.

Have a good holiday and give my best regards to your family!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件。

第一步：審題：

文體：建議信，提綱類作文

內(nèi)容：假如你是李華，用英語(yǔ)給你的同學(xué)Van為他媽媽的中國(guó)特色的禮物提建議回復(fù)郵件。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1. 建議禮物:旗袍，中國(guó)結(jié)等2. 說(shuō)明選擇禮物的原因3. 表達(dá)祝福和問(wèn)候

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總結(jié)構(gòu)

第二步：關(guān)鍵詞（組）：

homeland；summer holidays；gifts；symbolize；Chinese culture；Chi-pao；Chinese knot；souvenir；sitting room；decoration；good luck等

第三步：連詞成句：

1. I’m delighted to know that you are going back to your homeland during this summer holidays

2. you want to bring some gifts for your mother, which symbolize Chinese culture

3. I think Chi-pao, a beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman

4. the Chinese knot is also a nice souvenir, which is usually hung in the sitting room as a beautiful decoration

5. I do hope it will bring your family good luck and happiness

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）：

and；First；From one’s point of view；In addition；also；as等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改