Question

4．一家英語報社向中學(xué)生征文，主題是"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．（贈人玫瑰，手有余香）"，請根據(jù)自己對這句話的理解按下列要求用英語寫一篇短文．
要求：
1．意義
2．事例
3．感想
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
A well-known proverb goes that"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．，which i think means helping others is helping ourselves．（點(diǎn)明意義）
（開頭寫事例）I can well remember that three weeks ago my classmates and i went to help a lonely old couple do some housework before the Spring Festival．Upon arrival，we set out to help wash the windows and mop the floor．We also stuck some beautiful paper-cuts on the window to add to the festival atmosphere．They were so happy and were smiling all the time．（高分句型一）Tired as we were，we also felt delighted．（高分句型二）Anf most impotantly，hearing what we did，my parents praised our deeds，which made me experience the true happiness of the helping others．
In my opinion，（發(fā)表感想）helping others not only benefits the receiver but also the giver．Therfore，one should always be ready to help others．．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Tired as we were，we also felt delighted．
該句型使用來as引導(dǎo)的倒裝句，意思是盡管我們很累，但是我們很高興．將tired提前倒裝起到強(qiáng)調(diào)的作用．
（高分句型二）Anf most impotantly，hearing what we did，my parents praised our deeds，which made me experience the true happiness of the helping others．
句子里hearing what we did是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，相當(dāng)于一個時間狀語從句；which引導(dǎo)一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前面整個句子．
高級詞匯短語：Upon arrival 一…就…；set out to do開始做某事； most impotantly更重要的是；not only…but also 不僅而且；be ready to 準(zhǔn)備做某事．

解答 A well-known proverb goes that"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．，which i think means helping others is helping ourselves．（點(diǎn)明意義）
    （開頭寫事例）I can well remember that three weeks ago my classmates and i went to help a lonely old couple do some housework before the Spring Festival．Upon arrival，we set out to help wash the windows and mop the floor．We also stuck some beautiful paper-cuts on the window to add to the festival atmosphere．They were so happy and were smiling all the time．（高分句型一）Tired as we were，we also felt delighted．（高分句型二）Anf most impotantly，hearing what we did，my parents praised our deeds，which made me experience the true happiness of the helping others．
    In my opinion，（發(fā)表感想）helping others not only benefits the receiver but also the giver．Therfore，one should always be ready to help others．

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