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【題目】中國人出國旅游的不文明行為越來越受到廣泛關(guān)注。請以表格中所列舉的事實(shí)為依據(jù)，寫一則英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

不文明行為	你的看法
在公共場所： 隨地吐痰 亂丟垃圾 大聲喧嘩 ……	注意言談舉止 愛護(hù)環(huán)境 維護(hù)中國人的形象 ……

注意：

1. 文章必須包括表格中的提示內(nèi)容，可以增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右；

3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

4. 參考詞匯：亂丟 (垃圾) litter；吐痰 spit；形象 image；聲譽(yù) reputation

As more and more Chinese go on overseas trips, reports about their bad manners flood in.

Answer 1

【答案】

As more and more Chinese go on overseas trips, reports about their bad manners flood in. Many overseas Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere. The poor behavior or some Chinese has done great harm to our good reputation. China has become an important corner of the global village. We have to understand and respect foreign cultures, so as to get along well when having overseas trips. So before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes. Wherever you go you need to protect the environment. In this way, you'll win respect for yourself as well as our country.

【解析】

試題分析：中國人出國旅游的不文明行為越來越受到廣泛關(guān)注。請以表格中所列舉的事實(shí)為依據(jù)，寫一則英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。不文明行為：在公共場�?.隨地吐痰2.亂丟垃圾3大聲喧嘩 ……；你的看法1.注意言談舉止2.愛護(hù)環(huán)境3.維護(hù)中國人的形象 …。注意：1. 文章必須包括表格中的提示內(nèi)容，可以增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；2. 詞數(shù)100左右；3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫并且要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

避免全部使用簡單句，這樣太單調(diào)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】As more and more Chinese go on overseas trips, reports about their bad manners flood in.在句中使用了As引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和比較級；Many overseas Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere.被動(dòng)語態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語從句和賓語從句完美結(jié)合；We have to understand and respect foreign cultures, so as to get along well when having overseas trips.動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語，同時(shí)巧妙結(jié)合了連詞后跟現(xiàn)在分詞的結(jié)構(gòu)；before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes.時(shí)間狀語從句，非限制性定語從句和祈使句同時(shí)出現(xiàn)在一句中，很經(jīng)典；Wherever you go you need to protect the environment. Wherever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用獨(dú)特。