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假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)( ＾), 并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ＼）劃掉。

修改： 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改十處, 多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

Last summer vacation, I went back to my hometown to visit my grandparent. They had several cows in their yard. One day, one of them were ill, but it didn’t want take any medicine. An animal doctor came and gave it an injection. After a while, and it seemed to be better, so I decided to feed it anything. I fed it carrots, which were cutting into small pieces. I also fed it milk powder with pills in them, just as a doctor told me. Although looking after an ill cow was a tired job, I felt a sense of achievement as it begins to recover.

【答案】

【1】grandparents

【2】were-was

【3】want to

【4】and it 去掉and

【5】anything –something

【6】cutting-cut

【7】pills in them – it

【8】a doctor- the

【9】tired – tiring

【10】 begins – began

【解析】

試題分析：考查記敘文閱讀，本文講述了去年暑假我回到故鄉(xiāng)看望爺爺奶奶時(shí)幫助治療一只生病的奶牛的事。

【1】grandparents 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)后一句中they，說明我要去看望爺爺奶奶兩個(gè)人，所以使用復(fù)數(shù)形式grandparents。

【2】were-was 考查主謂一致。本句的主語是one of them，這是一個(gè)單數(shù)名詞，所以謂語動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)該使用單數(shù)，再根據(jù)last summer vacation說明本文使用一般過去時(shí)，所以使用was。

【3】want to 考查固定搭配。短語want to do sth想要做某事；其中的不定式作為動(dòng)詞want的賓語。

【4】and it 去掉and 考查句中結(jié)構(gòu)。本句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，so引導(dǎo)的是從句，前面應(yīng)該是主句，所以并列連詞and是多余的。

【5】anything –something 考查不定代詞。代詞something某些東西，該詞通常用于肯定句，而anything通常用于疑問句和否定句中。

【6】cutting-cut 考查語態(tài)。本句是一個(gè)定語從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代先行詞carrots在句中作主語，與動(dòng)詞cut該詞被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)形式were cut。

【7】pills in them – it 考查代詞。本句中代詞it指代不可數(shù)名詞milk，而them通常指代可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【8】a doctor- the 考查定冠詞。在英語中定冠詞the可以特指上文提到的某一個(gè)事物或人，所以本句中the doctor指代上文中的an animal doctor。

【9】tired – tiring 考查形容詞。形容詞tiring令人疲憊的，該詞通常修飾事物；形容詞tired感到疲憊的，該詞通常修飾人。本句中使用tiring修飾名詞job。

【10】begins – began 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)本文第一句Last summer vacation....可知本文敘述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，全文都使用一般過去時(shí)，所以使用began。

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