Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇題為SAVE EARTH, SAVE US的公益廣告解說(shuō)詞。

污染的原因		人類(lèi)的生產(chǎn)和生活活動(dòng)（請(qǐng)自行列舉）
	污染類(lèi)型		1. 空氣污染    2. 噪音污染       3. 水污染
	造成后果		1. 物種減少    2. 人類(lèi)健康受損   3. 環(huán)境惡化
	建議措施		(請(qǐng)自己列出若干條)

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右，答題卷的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。         
2．內(nèi)容要涵蓋上面所列的幾條。

Answer 1

SAVE EARTH, SAVE US
With the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem.
Smoke from factories and gases from vehicles are the main reasons for air pollution. Rivers are polluted when people throw waste into them, or when factories pour waste water into them. Modern lifestyle and modern ways of production also cause noise pollution. As a result, many species are dying out. More and more people are suffering from health problems.
Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken. Firstly, we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with. Secondly, we should raise people’s awareness of the serious problem and call on more people to protect the environment. Only by working together can we help the environment!

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)表述公益廣告解說(shuō)詞，具體信息是以表格的形式給出，考點(diǎn)只需要適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要注意使用英語(yǔ)句型，也要使用倒裝句，定語(yǔ)從句等特殊的句式來(lái)提高文章的多樣性。如：Only by working together can we help the environment!還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句與句連起來(lái)，如：Firstly, Secondly等。關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如With the development of modern society, Enough attention should be paid to this problem, die out滅絕 ,call on sb to do sth號(hào)召某人做…，prevent sb from doing sth防止某人做…，還運(yùn)用了Only by working together can we help the environment!倒裝句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：As a result；Firstly,…Secondly,…等等。